Fan Fiction |
by Carmen Yip
Sorry to disappoint some of ya...
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[Tuesday – 16 August 1994 – 7th day – late]
The sweet fragrance of her hair was still lingering in the air. He draws her endearingly into his embrace as she buries her head beneath his. He tilts his head a little and sent a butterfly kiss on her forehead.
HELEN: (softly) Tim…
"TIM": Huh?
HELEN: (hesitates) Erh… what are you thinking of?
"TIM": (smiles) Thinking of you!
HELEN: You’re lying, I’m here!
"TIM": I’m not, I have been missing you a lot… I’ve been thinking about us…
HELEN: What about us?
"TIM": Helen, if I do you wrong one day, will you forgive me?
HELEN: That depends…
"TIM": Helen, do you know I love you?
HELEN: (smiles) I don’t…
"TIM": Now you do!
HELEN: I still don't know…
"TIM": Helen, will you give me a chance if I do something wrong?
HELEN: Hmmm… maybe…
"TIM": (thinking) But one may be not enough, how about three?
HELEN: Ha! You’re so greedy!
"TIM": Yes I am, will you?
HELEN: Why are you asking such a strange question?
"TIM": Hmm.. answer me first!
HELEN: Hmm… why must I agree?
"TIM": Because I love you!
HELEN: Lame reason…
"TIM": If you agree we will have a very happy future…
HELEN: How do you know? You’re not god!
"TIM": Agree me, and you can have anything you want after that, please…
HELEN: Hmmm…
"TIM": Please…
HELEN: (smiles) Ok then…
"TIM": Promise?
HELEN: Promise!
"TIM": (kisses her cheek) Love you, sweetie! I wish this moment could last forever!
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[Next morning]
Tim was happily indulging himself in his dreamland. The place was all colored white, and the fragrance of lilies dissipated into the air in seconds. It was like a set-up, as if the whole thing was on stage, the stage of heaven. She stretches out her slender hand, and he extended his. He feels her hand gently, it was smooth as silk, her smile was sweet as honey, and his feelings were beyond description. They sat on the bench, as she rests her head peacefully on his shoulder, and he leans his across. Their hands found each other playmates to occupy themselves in, and they close their eyes in satisfaction, enjoying the sheer bliss of tranquil. They were whispering something.
Suddenly, the voice gets softer, and he couldn’t hear what they were saying, he tried to lean closer, but there were noisy interruptions which came in all over the place. He covered his ears in annoyance, but the noises were getting louder…
VOICES: Tim! Tim!
He opens his eyes gradually, and stretches out his right hand to reach for her. But she wasn’t there! Instead, a hand secured his hand.
VOICE: Tim!
TIM: (called out) Helen!
Then he turned to his right and took a closer look, and shook off the hand in disappointment. The girl gave almost the same reaction.
KEUNG: (exclaimed) Tim! You finally came to!
MR. AND MRS. YIP: (overjoyed) We’ll call the doctor!
MEINA: Tim, you scared us!
TIM: (pressing his fingers against his head) Ah Yan, you’re here too!
MEINA: (weird look) Tim, what are you talking about? You’re scaring me!
TIM: (looks at them) What’s wrong? Where’s Helen?
KEUNG: Tim! You are certainly scaring us!
TIM: (confused as he feels pain from his head) What happened, Ah Keung?
KEUNG: Tim! You really don’t remember anything?
TIM: (shakes his head) I’m back… And you are Meina...
KEUNG: I don't know what happened to you that made you sped along the highway and crashed into the lorry…
MEINA: Tim! Do you know how worried we were? You laid here for a full week!
TIM: (confused in thought) I did? (brush his fingers into his hair) I don't know!
MEINA: It’s ok Tim! What’s important is that you have awakened! I must return my praying tomorrow!
KEUNG: Yeah, Lik Tin can’t do without you, you must know that!
TIM: Lik Tin?
KEUNG: Yes!
TIM: What happened to Lik Tin?
KEUNG: Have you forget about our meeting with the important Taiwanese client? About smoke-free city!
TIM: My… my head hurts… what Taiwanese client…
KEUNG: You can’t possibly tell me you forgot that, Tim!
TIM: I don't know!
MEINA: Keung Ah! Stop forcing him! Give him some time to recall the details!
KEUNG: (checked the table) There’s no water, I’ll get you some, Tim. (exits)
MEINA: Tim, it’s alright, the doctor says you may suffer from concussion and therefore may lose partial of your memory, it will be temporal!
TIM: I certainly hope so!
Tim looked around the room in search of his memory, but of course he couldn’t remember anything from there. Suddenly a little pink handkerchief caught his eyes, as he fetches it to him slowly. Little pieces of memories flashes in solidity at the back of his mind, slowing shifting up…
As hard as he might try, those little jigsaw pieces just doesn’t seems to fit together. Maybe it was a sign that things weren’t really ready to explain themselves…
At this time, the door pushes open as Chi Keung enters again…
MEINA: Keung, you brought the warm water?
KEUNG: Yah… (turns and to the corridor) Gallen, don’t run about the hallway, it’s not somewhere for you to play!
TIM: (curious) Who is he, Keung?
KEUNG: You don’t remember him, Tim?
TIM: (shakes his head) Nope…
KEUNG: (extending his hand to the corridor) Come in, Gallen!
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PS: Hey guyz I know this is a total mess up but that's just what I'm most capable of. If u wanna see what I will gao gao zan next, then stay tuned, if not well... :p
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