| Fan Fiction |
by BabyCherish
I requested a review from Wonderous Scribbles and they have kindly reviewed this fic. PLease read it when you have the time.
http://www.wondrousscribbles.co.nr/
Here's the review thing.
Title: Till There Was You
Author: AeYun
Story url: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/AeYun/
Reviewed by: Jiershinaze of www.wondrousscribbles.co.nr
Title: 3/5
I can’t still figure out if you’re title relates your story because it is still undeveloped. That’s why I can’t give you a high mark here. And one more thing, your chosen title is kinda common.
Poster/Background: 3/10
Sorry but that score is for your POSTER ONLY…..because you don’t have any background at all….
Foreword: 6 /10
Sorry for another low mark here. But I think you weren’t able to present an interesting foreword. Yeah....you may you’re forewords may contain an introduction of the casts but I think you should introduce the important characters only.
Plot: 11/15
Nothing more to say… as I have said your story is still undeveloped but somehow I found it interesting…..so keep up the good work….
Creativity/Originality: 12/15
It is not so unique and not to common just average that why I also give you an average score here. Sorry, it’s just that I’m really looking for something unique….
Writing Style: 8/10
I like the writing style that you use…it’s not like those scripted ones. And because of it, you were able to describe the happenings in the story…. Good Job!
Flow: 8/10
I give you a high grade in this section because as I have said earlier even though your story is still undeveloped I still find your chapters interesting…..Hope you will continue the good work….
Grammar/Spelling/Vocab: 7/10
I’m not so strict regarding grammar, spellings and vocabulary but I have notice that there we’re some grammatical and vocabulary errors. But don’t worry those we’re just mere errors. For sure, you can correct it.
Characterization: 8/10
Sorry but you failed to show the personality of the characters. I know it’s not such an easy thing to do. And I do understand you’re situation because the story is still undeveloped.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I did enjoy you’re story and I can’t wait for your next chapters…hehehehe…. And that’s the reason why I give you a high mark in this section.
Bonus: 5/5
Just because I really enjoy your story I decided to give you a bonus…hehehehe…lols.
Total 75/100
Sorry for the low mark….. I’m just being honest….. But don’t worry much because I believe that you can improve your skill in writing…. Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer. Good luck to your fanfic and keep up the good work.
Thanks for reviewing Wonderous Scribbles, Jiershinaze!!
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BTW!! I just got the Background and such from this oh so lovely people. ^3^
http://www.soulful-life.kk5.org/#/welcome/4532281408
Just in case you guys didn't know...
I'm a member of that site ^-^ As an advertiser~
I'm Yon~Hea~Chi ^-^
http://www.soulful-life.kk5.org/#/sflfamily2/4532383894
AND I am advertising right now!!
Soulful Life provides Posters, Backgrounds, Wallpapers, CC's, Banners AND Trailers! ^-^
They created the background for my other fic, In Your Hands as well ^-^.
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They are truly fantastic.
Hope you guys like them as much as i do ^-^
If you're thinking of writing your own fic and you're in need of any backgrounds and such Soulful Life is the place to go ^-^~
So again!
Thank you too Jiershinaze for the wonderful review &
dbsklover for the awesome background,poster and CC ^-^
Thank you for supporting my fic everyone and Please wait patiently for me to update.
School and such are keeping me busy so I'm sorry for that.
Have a nice day/night.
Love,
AeYun