| Fan Fiction |
by BoBoLi0us
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Title: 5/5
The title is creative and ties in with the story completely.
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Poster/Background: 5/5
The poster is so you =p that's all. I liked the design of it and I also liked how it sort of fitted in with the mood of the story.
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Forewards: 9/10
I loved how you included a bit of the story in the beginning before introducing the story (author, story name, etc) to the reader. It's kinda like a short trailer before the story started, and I really, really, really liked that.
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Plot: 12/15
I really did love the plot- simple, sweet, yet slightly angst. I took marks off because some elements were predictable.
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Originality: 18/20
Despite your plot being somewhat predictable, there was a lot of things that you added in there and spiced up the story as the author. For example, Jaebum being so poor and his reason for joining JYP, Christina's personal blog, etc. You showed originality throughout the fic with a lot of details and your own things to make the plot interesting and make the story itself interesting to read.
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Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 12/15
A few spelling errors here and there ("pray/prey"), repetitive words in a close format (he/she/their names). I understand that the repetitive words may be or is apart of your writing style, but some of those words are redundant and therefore unnecessary.
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Detail: 5/5
Lots and lots of detail everywhere, the shot is FILLED with detail. Should I offer an example, it would be the entire shot.
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Writing Style: 10/10
Despite the element involving repetitive words and such, I really love your writing style- it's not only you (the author ), but it also fits the mood of the story. Different stories have their set moods, but your writing style matches with those perfectly. Good job! =)
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Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Other than a couple of spelling/errors here and there and some of the parts' predictability, I loved the fic. It had so much of the author herself in it that it absorbed me too.
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Bonus: 5/5
You interact with your readers, not to mention that I did love the shot.
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Total: 90/100
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kudos to Nii from SHredded hearts!