| Fan Fiction |
by BlueBird
Title 5/5
I love the title! It’s very eye catching.
Poster/Background 9/10
Your poster is nice, but then I think it could’ve been a little better, because it didn’t really match the title as much.
Forewords 9/10
Your foreword was good. Not what I would expect to be, but I like how you started with a beginning where the girl talks about her love one who had left 8 years.
Plot 14/15
Eh, your plot was good and all, but I’ve read many stories like this before. But I still love it.
Flow 10/10
The flow was great.. It wasn’t too fast, and I liked it.
Writing Style 5/5
Your writing style is GREAT! I love it, and I encourage you to keep up your good work!
Character Development 10/10
Your character development was pretty good.
Creativity/Originality 10/10
You have such a creative mind to write so good like this!
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabularies 10/10
Your grammar was good, and I found no mistake anywhere at all. You write pretty differently, and I like it a lot!
Overall Enjoyment 10/10
Oh boy, I enjoyed reading this story a lot. I can’t wait for more updates!
Bonus Point 5/5
Of course I’m giving you bonus points. You are talented and a hard worker. Your story is a 5 star!
Total Points = 97/100
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Thanks a lot for this review ^^ I'm glad you like my fic.
To the readers: I'm really sorry for not updating so long. Almost 25 days? I'm so sorry >.< somehow i had a writers block? I couldn't get anything like i wanted it to. But now it's better.