| Fan Fiction |
by Boscolieeva
Ray: Wow! The food its great. It's like you are at home and eating the food that your mom makes.
Moses: told you. They are really good cook.
Bernice: Well eat more. You guys better finish all these food.
After they are done eating. The boys took out thier wallets.
Ron: Ok how much?
Tavia: Put it away first.
Bernice: You guys don't need to pay.
Moses: oh, ok.
Linda: You guys are going to clean.
Ray: Whats!
Linda: Hey, we cook you guys clean.
Ron: Fine!!
Tavia: Well have fun! (giggle)
Moses: Whoa!! The Kit..kitchen is a.......a..... me..mess!!
Bernice: I know.... someone did that this morning....(looking at Tavia while she was talking)
Linda: TAVIA!!! (Looking at her too, and finish Bernice sentence)
Tavia: But....but...... (bernice and Linda gave her a stare) Sorry.....
*Flashback*
Bernice: Whoa!! Tav, what did you do?
Tavia: um, I know it a bit....................
Linda: It look like a hurricane just went by. How are we going to clean this up!!??!!
Bernice: you clean it Tav.
Tav: Hey at least the food is great. I have an idea.
Linda: Whats your idea? Hope is a way to clean the mess up.
Bernice: It better, look at it there is stuff on the wall and the floor too.
Tavia: Just chill, this is what we'll do. We invite them for dinner and they going to clean it. Also the food is not that cheap.
Bernice: Ok, it fine with me as long I'm not cleaning it.
Tavia: Still have time before school.
Linda: Lets go food shopping.
*End of Flashback*
While the boys are cleaning, the girls sat there watching a TVB series.
Bernice: you guys better clean it good. (Yelling to them)
MOses: ok we well. Almost done (yelling back) she loves stuff clean.
Ray: oh
10 min later
Ray: Wow!! That was tiring.
Ron: I'm tire. Tavia next time try to stay out of the kitchen or just be careful.
Tavia: excuse me!! You want me to stay out of MY kitchen?
Bernice: I agree with one Tavia.
Ron: well then don't make we clean it. WEll anyways I'm going back. BYE TAVIA!!! (Loud voice) bye linda (soft voice) Bye Bernice and good night (Sweet voice)
Moses: yea, I'm going over to. Bye
Girls: Bye
*Back at the Boys apartment. Ron went to shower and Moses went to his room. Ray sat in the living room thinking to himself, having that dreamy look*
Ray's POV
She is so pretty. I don't know her long, but I could tell she is a caring person. She is smart, pretty, a good cook. Mom would like her. I think I'm falling for her. Wait a sec..... I just came here, she probably don't have that feeling towards me.
Ray staring into his future......
girl: Hi honey your home early today.
Ray: yea, I missed you today. (went over and hug her)
how is my little jacky boy?
Jacky: Daddy, I missed you. Lets play!!!
Ray: how about we go out for dinner tonight?
Girl: sure, Jacky go get ready.
Jacky: ok
Ray hug her from the back and said, " I love you honey, thanks for giving me a great future. I would never let go of you, if I did, I don't think I could survive. You're my everything. LOve you" Ray kiss her and it became a passionate kiss.
Jacky: ewww (covering his eyes and giggle)......................
Moses hit him in the back and it scared him and that brought Ray back to reality.
Ray: what was that for.
Moses: Its your turn and what were you thinking about anyways (moving closer to him)
Ron: yea, I know right. You have that dreamy look on your face. We been sitting here for 15min staring at you.
Ray: what are you guys taking about.
Ron: you like someone. Don't you?
Ray: no I don't...... I just just.... *sigh* leave me alone
Ron and moses laughing at him.
*At the girls apartment*
Linda's POV
He is cute and hot. Good Looking, caring and smart. If I date him, he will treat me well not like the last guy I dated. I could tell he would treat me well. Am I falling for him?
That night Ray and Linda are out in the balcony. They both look up in the sky. The night is quiet and there is a gentle breeze.
Ray POV
Hope she likes me. Wow!!! Tonight there is so many stars.
Linda POV
Hope he likes me. What a "Starry starry night" tonight is? The sky is so beautiful.
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What do you guys think? Is it good. Wonder who Ray and Linda is taking about right? Hehehe, you will find out next chapter =] So stay tune ^^
I was thinking just to end it here and leave as a cliffhanger, but then I decide not to. Anyway should I make a part 2? It'll up to you people to decide =]
Stay tune for Chapter seven ^^