| Fan Fiction |
by Erika
"Miss ? The car is here," The maid softly knocks on my door.
Byebye room.
With a reluctant sigh, I pull my suitcase out of the door and follow the maid to the front door. Before going out, I turn around to face the house.
You know, to get a final look. Since I'm going to be living in a different house from now on.
"Miss ?" The maid asks.
I go back to reality, long enough to nod my head. "Er, yeah, let's go."
Byebye house.
I step out into the sunshine and follow the maid to the black car parked in front of my house. By the time I got there, my suitcase is already in the trunk. And so, saying goodbye to the maid, I slide into the back seat.
As the car drives off to my new home, I glance out of the window to kill time.
Unselfconsciously, I finger the necklace strapped around my neck.
It was given to me by my mother, before she died. As a birthday present. She told me that the necklace was given to her by my grandmother on HER birthday and she wanted to pass it down to me. In hopes that someday, I might pass it down to my own daughter.
Pfft. As if I'm going to have a daughter.
I'm not interested in any kind of relationship. Except for maybe, friendship or something.
But love and all that ? No way.
I wonder how the boys will react when they see me ? Have they lived with a girl before ?
Although, I'm different from most girls. For one thing, I don't fangirl over silly bands like DBSK. And another thing, I don't wear skirts or wear make-up or anything that I think is girly. And lastly, and for this, you'll think that I'm sexist, I hate the colour pink.
To simplify, I'm a tomboy.
If those guys are used to girls fainting when they're around, then man, will they be disappointed.
How far is their house anyway ?!
I didn't get the chance to eat any breakfast and right now, I am as hungry as I was last night during dinner.
10 minutes later, the car is still driving. And I am probably half-dead by now.
10 more minutes passed and the driver turns back to face me. "Miss, we're nearly there."
I nod at him and lean my head back against the seat.
Good.
It's early. Maybe those boys are having breakfast now. Maybe I can join in.
Suddenly, my stomach does a funny jolt as I remember something.
My father told me that he will be at the boys' house when I move in. You know, to introduce me to them, blah blah blah. It's like I;m some 5 year old kid who has a disability to introduce myself. Still, I'm grateful. I've never seen these boys before and I have no idea what their personalities are so yeah, I'm happy.
5 minutes later, the car shudders to a halt in front of a big white mansion. I look out of the window.
Wow, their garden has a fountain.
The driver goes out from the driver seat and opens the back door for me. as I'm stepping out of the car, he scuttles to the trunk and takes out my suitcase.
"Um, your father told me that you have to go in by yourself ..." The driver tips his hat and goes back inside the car. With a rumble, he drives off, leaving me in front of the mansion.
And I really don't know what to do now.
[Yunho's POV]
Our manager paces up and down the front balcony with his hands behind his back. He looks nervous.
"Where is she ? Where is she ?" He keeps repeating under her breath.
I stand up and put my hand on his shoulder. "Sir, relax, she'll be ... Hey, is that her ?" I point at a girl standing in front of our gate. A suitcase is beside her and she's looking down so I really can't check if she's cute or not.
I mean, check if ... her hair is long or not ... Oh never mind.
"________ !" Our manager runs to the gate.
I turn to the guys, who are busy eating their breakfast.
"Alright, guys. We owe a favour to our manager so we agreed for this girl to live with us. Now, I know that we never lived with a girl before so this might be ... Kind of awkward. But remember, whatever her personality turns out to be, be nice to her and maybe, if we're lucky, she'll be nice back," I tell them.
Yoochun raises up his hand. I roll my eyes at him. "Yoochun, we're not in a classroom."
"I know, but you sounded like a teacher," Yoochun says, his mouth full of scrambled eggs. "But anyway, what if the girl is evil and, I don't know, throws our toothbrush in the toilet, should I just stand there and congratulate her ?"
Resist, Yunho. He's your friend. You cannot kill your friend.
After silently counting to ten, I answer back, "I'm sure she won't do that."
"Do what ?" The manager's voice jumps out behind me.
Sharply, I turn around, after giving Yoochun a glare. Our manager is standing in front of me. And the girl, who is probably his daughter, is looking at me.
I gulp.
This girl is way beyond cute. Almond-shaped brown eyes, long, wavy black hair ... Oh, and she's tall too. The only flaw is the emotionless expression on her face as she continues staring at me.
I feel my cheeks grow hot.
After regaining my composure; which took a long time, by the way, I remember my manners and stick out my hand, asking for a shake.
The girl peers at it, looking doubtful. After a few silent minutes, she reaches out, grabs my hand and shake it.
The rest, except for Changmin stands up and elbows me out of the way.
"Hi, I'm Jaejoong," Jaejoong hyung grabs her hand and vigourously shakes it.
She says nothing.
Yoochun shoves Jaejoong away and snatches her hand. "I'm Yoochun."
Eurgh, he's using that low voice again. He thinks that it's seductive and whenever he uses it, he believes that every girl who hears it will immediately melt in his arms.
So far, it works.
I tried it once and it totally failed. In fact, the girl asked me if there is something wrong with my throat.
Aish.
Junsu whacks Yoochun's head and takes the girl's hand. "I'm Junsu."
I sigh at their childishness.
The girl takes back her hand and I nearly laugh at Junsu's crestfallen expression.
"Boys, this is my daughter, ________," our manager informs us.
Changmin continues eating. The nerve of that guy. Still, I guess I can't blame him. He's never flirty when it comes to cute girls. In fact, he's almost indifferent.
_______ looks at us and waves.
I step up to her. "Let me show you your room."
She opens her mouth to say something but was cut off when her stomach grumbles.
"Crap," I hear her curse under her breath.
"Well, I'll be going now. I still have that meeting with the manager of the company ..." Our manager hugs ______ one last time before scrambling out of the gates.
Junsu takes his half-finished plate of food and shove it under _____'s nose.
"Here, if you're hungry, you can eat the rest of my food," he says.
Suck-up.
_______ peers down at it.
"Um ..." I hear her say. "Maybe later."
Jaejoong takes her suitcase and drags it into the house. Changmin finishes his food and stands up.
"Hi, I'm Changmin !" He grins at ________.
"Hello," _______ coldly acknowledges him.
"Come on, let us walk you up to your room," I motion for her to follow us into the house.
She takes an obvious deep breath and steps in.
Quietly, and because we don't know what to say, we walk up the stairs, Jaejoong and Yoochun heaving ________'s suitcase together.
It must be heavy.
We walk across the long hallway and stop in front of the door at the end of the hallway.
"Here's your room," I open the door and step back to make room for her to go in, along with Jaejoong and Yoochun with her suitcase.
She walks around the room and we all watch and wait for her reaction.
Once she has circled the room, she goes back to the front door. "Thank you. It's very nice."
Yoochun and Jaejoong hyung places her suitcase beside her bed and runs back to the bedroom door.
"Do you need any help with the unpacking ?" I ask her but she shakes her head.
Wow, it's hard to make a conversation with this girl. Normally, it's the other way round. Girls usually tries hard to make us talk to them.
She's different.
Good different.
"Well, we'll be downstairs if you need us," I smile at her but she doesn't return the favour.
Does she ever smile ?!
With a nod, she closes her bedroom door, leaving us staring at it.
"Come on, we still have to get ready for the interview later." I drag them all down to the living room.
"She's different, huh ?" Junsu asks me as we walk down the stairs. I nod at him.
"She doesn't seem to smile. She's almost expressionless," Changmin says thoughtfully.
"Like, something is stopping her from being happy ..." Yoochun, who is considered the 'smartest' one here, says.
We walk into the kitchen.
"Well then, it's up to us to make her happy," Jaejoong says.
Of course. That is what a mother will say.
Hahaha.
"But how ? She seems kind of ... Cold. Like, something from her past is bothering her," I add in and everyone nods.
This is going to be hard.
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Too short or just right ?
I'm sorry if it's too boring.
It's morning here now and I just woke up, LOL.
Still, I hope you like it.
Eun Chin--10 June 2009 at 8:44 a.m.
hehe.. looking forward to the moving in scene..
Jaejoong or Yoochun..
But i still like to see the tension and competition between the guys..
haha.. UPDATE MORE..
Reply: You'll see the tension, don't worry. It's too early for that now but hey, it'll come.
jane_kim --10 June 2009 at 8:47 a.m.
new reader your fic's really interesting
ver cool he he:D I vote for junsu I really
like him A LOT:D LOL hope you update soon:D
Reply: Junsu is a cutie pie :D LOL. And thank you.
JaeSu fan--10 June 2009 at 8:57 a.m.
Update soon!!!
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! ^_^
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Eun Chin, do I know you? or is it that you see my name at the comments pages of certain stories regarding DBSK? x.x
Reply: :O LOL.
Sei_September--10 June 2009 at 11:35 a.m.
OMO~!!!
1st vote for Changmin-oppa...
Yaaaay!!! XD
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Aja aja Erika-sshi
Can't wait for the next part ^^
Reply: WHOO, finally ! Someone voted for Changmin !
Daphne--10 June 2009 at 12:45 p.m.
ahhhh!!! i vote for changmin, definitely. i go crazy over ALL but recently, i'm more for changmin. teehee.
Reply: I understand :] Changmin is very yummy. x],
Sarah--10 June 2009 at 1:11 p.m.
Hey new reader!!!!!!!!!!!! love your story and i vote for changmin because i love him lots ^^
Reply: YAY ! And thank you for reading :]
dani xD--10 June 2009 at 1:14 p.m.
great start...jaejoong oppa all the way:Dxxx!!
Reply: Thank you, thank you. And LOL, how come I'm not surprised that many people voted for Hero ?
cubey--10 June 2009 at 1:14 p.m.
Yoochun or JaeJoong :)
love DBSK<3
Reply: I love them too :O !
Shayne!--10 June 2009 at 1:47 p.m.
I Want Yunho!
XD
WOOOOOOO GO YUNHO!
Reply: Yunho hyung must be very flattered right now.
aznraisin--10 June 2009 at 5:22 p.m.
awww this chapter was a little sad... but i luv ur story so far! yeeehh i luv changminnie 2! i vote changmin! :) psht can i vote twice for changmin? hehe jk.. can't wait for next chappie! :)
Reply: Changmin seems more popular than I thought ... :D
JaEyA_22--10 June 2009 at 7:21 p.m.
woW!!!!nice story...
i'll definitly vote for Jaejoong
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Reply: Thank you, and LOOKIE, I updated :D
h e r o j a e j o o n g f a n--10 June 2009 at 7:55 p.m.
my name says it all
DEFINITELY voting for J A E J O O N G <3 of course =D
Reply: I like your name, though. Very creative :]
D B S K < 3--10 June 2009 at 9:32 p.m.
it's a good start^^
i like it(:
UPDATE SOOON!~
(;
Reply: Okay, but who do you vote for ? :D and thank you !
little_muffin--10 June 2009 at 9:42 p.m.
Ohh~ Can't wait to no wat happens next~ I vote for JaeJoong~!
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Update ;)
Reply: :D This chapter might be boring. You can kill me, LOL.
JaeJoong21--10 June 2009 at 9:47 p.m.
hey new reader here! OMO! Your story is awsome:) I vote for Jaejoong Oppa!
Reply: :O New reader ! WHOO !
VOTES:
Jaejoong: 8
Yunho: 2
Junsu: 2
Yoochun: 1
Changmin: 4
The voting is still on and it will stop next week.
On Monday. You people still have about 3 more days.
GO GO GO ! :D
<3 Erika.