Fan Fiction

UNCOMMITTED (non-yaoi)

by eprinces

Chapter 1

RAINY MOMENT

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Hanna sat on the edge of her bed, observing the outside world through her small bedroom window. It was heavily raining outside. Nothing could be seen, not even a soul. The room was dead quite. The only sound that could be heard was the sound of rain dropping over the roof.

Watching it rain like a shower, the fallen rain gave Hanna the urgent feeling of running out of her room and be out in the rain like she had done it once before. She could imagine herself being out there, feeling the rain washing over her body and being wet from head to toe.

But today, she had to prevent her urgent feeling; unless she was planning on being home sick the next day or be scolded by her beloved mother all day and night.

The outside view through the window was amazing for someone who liked raining moment. Why? You might ask. Rain had the power of sensing the hidden feeling within her. And sometimes, it reminded her of someone special, someone who wasn't right beside her at the moment but wished he was. Han couldn't help but miss that someone special.

Despite of the difficulty of not being together physically and the parents disapproval, she had stuck to her long distance relationship, patiently and faithfully.

“How time goes by when you stop and think for a moment.” Hanna thought to herself. In just about one month, they would be celebrating their one year anniversary, hopefully together rather than apart.

“RING RING”

Hanna snapped out of her depression thought when she heard her cell phone rang. She took out her cell phone from her brown bag and put it to her ear without checking to see who was calling.

“Hello?" Hanna then greeted the stranger on the other end.

"Hey Han." A familiar voice came through the other line taking her by surprise.“

Han said with a cheerful tone. “Oh my God, its really you!”

“Who else could it be, unless you are expecting someone. Just kidding. I did expect you to be surprise, but not THAT surprised.”

“First of all, I was not expecting anyone. I just didn't expected you to call at this time. You know, you usually call at nights. But its a nice surprise.“

“Yeah, sorry about that.”

Han didn't mind at all. The night time and sometimes, in the middle of night call seemed annoying. To her, it was nothing. She only cared about was the voice she missed every day.

“No, its fine. I'm just glad that you find enough time to make a call at this hour. It's nice to hear your voice.”

“Of course, I would find time for you no matter what I'm doing or where I am. I really miss you so much. How are you doing over there? “

Han was not doing okay. It was affecting her mentally and emotionally. But she wasn't going to admit it to Junsu, her boyfriend. Better to keep it to herself since she already had become helpless as her friend pointed it out.

“I'm doing okay except that I miss you desperately. You know, it is raining outside now and it makes me think of you.”

“Oh really? Tell me more.”

. “It reminds me of the day we spent time together out in the rain. Do you remember?” Holding back her laugh, Han responded

“Yeah, how can I forget that day. It was one of the precious and funnies moments that I remember.”

Just hearing the other's laugh makes her heart melt. How she wished she could see his handsome face as well.

“To me, it was embarrassing though. Because I, for first time ever, cried in front of you. However, when I think about it now, I'm glade it happened to be you instead of someone else.” ~laughing~ “The funny part was when it rained, I forced you to stay in the rain until it stopped.”
~both laughing~

“It was indeed. You know, we both were sick the very next day. And that night I thought you loved the rain more than you probably loved me.

Still smiling, she said. “Hey, that is not truth. Okay, maybe I did love the rain little bit more." She couldn't resist teasing Junsu.

“ I guess I was right all along then.“

Laughing at her boyfriend's cuteness, she replied. “Of course not, you know I love you more than anything. I”m just teasing you.”

“I'm happy to hear that. But I'm sure you don't love me more than I love you.”

Han challenged him. “Not true, I love you more.”

“Oh, really? Okay then, when we meet again, one of us have to prove it. how about that?"

"No, problem with me. I'll be ready."

"Don't be so confident. You might get scared and back on your words."

"That is not fair. Don't try to scare me."

"Remember, even life is not fair."

"Hey babe, I have to go. I'll call you tonight. If not, tomorrow. Okay?”

Unhappily, she replied. “Sure, I'll be waiting. Take care of yourself.”

“I'll and you do the same. I love you, my Han.”
“I love you, Kim Junsu.”

“Bye”

“Bye”
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Han hanged up her cell phone before placing it back into her brown bag. She lied back on her bed, looking up at the ceiling. To many things crossed her mind. Of course, it usually had to do with her boyfriend. Speaking of her boyfriend, whenever she thought of him, she never fail to remember his parents.

Whenever it came to her boyfriend's parents, it hurt her inside. Ever since her boyfriend had introduced her to his parents once, she had a feeling that his parents did not approve of her. It was not just a feeling, it was a fact. They did not need to say it in front of her because their action and attitude spoke more than they could possibly put it in words.

They seemed to think that she wasn't enough for their son as if she was missing something in her, not that she knew what exactly.

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“Han!”

Her mother's voice came from downstairs.

“Hanna!”

Her mother yelled out her name second time when she didn't get any response.

Realizing her mother's short temper, she quickly checked herself in front of her not-so-big mirror. She ran out of her bedroom and to the kitchen where her mother most likely to be.

“Yes, mother?”

Her mother looked up from whatever she was doing when she heard her daughter's approaching. “I'm preparing dinner but there is no more of salt. So, I want you to run to the market and buy some for me, would you?”

Without a second thought, Han replied. “Sure, mom.”

Her mother was counting the money when, out of nowhere, Han jumped on her mother and hugged her tightly like little child. Although her mom was taken by surprise, she happily hugged her daughter back just like a mother would. A mother didn't need a reason, which was why didn't bother to ask the reason behind the sudden action. And Han was glad she didn't.

Hanna looked away feeling embarrassed with her unexpected action.

Acknowledgedly, her mother assured her with a big smile on her face. “Don't be embarrassed baby. Here take this money and go buy what I told you.”

Hanna nodded and headed toward the front door.

“Hanna, be careful out there. No running or any kind of that.” Her mom commended her seriously.

“I will, mother.” Han said before she opened the door and left.
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“HEY, JEAJONG?”

Yoochun yelled from the kitchen to the person in the living room.

“WHAT IS IT, YOOCHUN?

Jae shouted back from the living room where he was watching a drama on the flat screen TV.

Yoochun: “DID YOU FORGET TO BUY MILK AND JUICE AGAIN? BECAUSE THE FRIDGE IS EMPETY.”

Jae looked away from the flat screen and turned his head toward the kitchen wondering if Yoochun was coming back to haunt him.

He signed in relieve. “KIND OF, SORRY. DO YOU WANT ME TO GO BUY SOME NOW?”

Yoochun: “NO, ITS OKAY. I'LL GO BUY SINCE I'M GOING OUT.”

Yoochun came back to the living room to take look at his roommate and maybe ask him to go out with him to the market. Seeing how Jeajong's full attention was on TV, he decided not to bother him instead.

“What a roommate you are, Jae.” Yoochun whispered on his way out. However, Jae didn't miss the remark. Jae just smiled at his roommate's cuteness before turning his attention back to TV once again.

Yoochun went back to his room and graped his jack before leaving his shared apartment with JaeJong.

TBC
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