Fan Fiction

She doesn't know what's in store for Her (R)

by TypicalSillyViet

Chapter 22

The BIG day!

GUYS, MAKE SURE YU READ THE END KAY? :(

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Roars and screams could be heard from all over the park from the gentle water rides to the fast and fierce rollercoasters. Sooyoung definitely felt excited and just looked as if she would burst if she was to feel more hyped up than she was now. JaeJoong just had a relaxed smile on his face, scanning through the attractions from the basketball hoops to 'Pop the Balloon!'

"So what do you wanna do first?" JaeJoong looked to his right and eyed the overly-excited SooYoung who looked as if she was thinking.
"hmmm, i'm not sure. what do you think? Scary-fast ones first or the relaxing-slow ones?" She asked.
Now JaeJoong was in a deep thought. "Hmm, what if we do the fast ones first, and then gentle one, and then fast and so on? We get the thrill and then some time to calm down after wards on a ride," He logically thought it all out, and all SooYoung could do was just nod.

"Alright then! What first..," She grabbed the park map that she picked up earlier when they were at the front gate and looked through them all.
"What about 'The Escape'? It's that Superman roller-coaster," She suggested.

(A/N: The Escape is an actual roller coaster. Based on the superhero Super Man. It's located in Brisbane Australia. photos:
pic 1: http://images.fanpop.com/images/image_uploads/Superman-Escape---Movie-World-rollercoasters-620516_400_265.jpg
pic 2: http://www.supermanhomepage.com/images/real-world/escape2.jpg
BRIEF description: SUPERMAN Escape is an unprecedented roller-coaster ride experience which travels 0 - 100 kilometers in just 2 seconds! That's not fast that's SUPERMAN fast! With 760 meters of vertical climbs, weightless drops, head spinning twists and giant G-force turns, SUPERMAN Escape completely redefines the coaster experience. copied and pasted that XD )

JaeJoong thought for awhile and smiled at SooYoung after 2 minutes and nodded. "Just make sure you don't beg me to get you off once we sit down," He joked.
"Oh shush! Won't Happen!" SooYoung laughed as she walked her way to the roller-coaster with Jaejoong close behind.

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"OMO! I'M GONNA DIE! JAEJOONG! OMO OMO!" SooYoung panicked. She was know sitting at the front next JaeJoong. She looked ahead for what she was in for. 'Can a roller-coaster be THAT high? and FAST?!?! omo i'm gonna die..' SooYoung started to shake and JaeJoong noticed this.
"SooYoung, don't worry, we've got alot of stuff to hold on to, and we are perfectly secure! and this ride has been tested! so just relax, I'm here with you," He spoke softly to her, and she slowly started to calm down.
"But if we die, I blame you..," She pouted and started to breath in and out slowly.
All JaeJoong could do was just chuckle at her childish response.

And after about 15 seconds, the Roller-coaster started to move. "OMO OMO OMO I'M GONNA DIE DIE DIE DIE OMO!" SooYoung's fears came rushing back up and she started to shake uncontrollably. "PABO! THEN WHY'D YOU CHOOSE THIS RIDE FOR?" JaeJoong yelled. SooYoung then fell silent and mumbled. "I don't knooOOOOOOWW!" SooYoung screamed the last bit as therollercoaster went FAST!

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMO OMO I SEE THE BIG BIG HILL THINGY!" SooYoung screamed and JaeJoong just started to laugh excitedly. "JAEJOONG OMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" And SooYoung screamed with fear even more as the mobile went up and down, spinning and such with such speed, she felt like she was going to die any moment. JaeJoong screamed too, but not out of fear, of joy.

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"ahh that was goood, right?" JaeJoong had the biggest smile, while SooYoung just looked uneasy. "Pabo! atleast we didn't die. we're still in one peice! no sweat!" He tried to brighten her mood, but it didn't seem to work. He then caught the sight of a Cotton Candy store and he knew girls loved the fluffiness of that sugary treat so he held her wrist and dragged her along.

"Yah! Where are we goi--" SooYoung exclaimed but stopped when the song Cotton Candy by DaeSung (Big Bang) rang through her ears. She turned to the Cotton Candy store where the music was coming from and JaeJoong just chuckled for the nth time.
"Can i have 2 Large Sticks?" He asked while fishing out his wallet. The ahjumma (i think its a word for respect to people you don't know?) sweetly nodded and went to fill in the order.

"Ahhh this store is just so happy and calming," SooYoung smiled, head swaying to the beat of the music.
"What do you expect? Hard rock metal music?" JaeJoong joked, and SooYoung just gave him a pout.
'Aish, does she know she looks cute like that?' JaeJoong thought has he stared at her lips for a few seconds until the ahjumma told him the amount to be paid for the sweet treats.

"Ah Thankyou Ahjumma!" JaeJoong sweetly smiled and bowed his head and handed one stick to SooYoung who looked at the candy with such delight.
"Alright now?" JaeJoong questioned. "Mmmhmm! We can go somewhere else now," SooYoung smiled and walked off to sit at a bench.
"So what now? Jae asked while grabbing SooYoung's map and scanning through. SooYoung then poked her head in to have a look too.
"hmmm, we can try win some souvenirs..i guess oh what about the Arcade?" SooYoung smiled as she pointed to the little picture on the map, and JaeJoong gave it some thought.

"Well then, lets go!" He stated, and grabbed their things and pulled SooYoung up, and off they went to the other side of the park.
SooYoung happily followed.

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After what seemed like eternity, SooYoung faced her fears and JaeJoong just had the time of his life. He won 3 bears for SooYoung, which she now secretly LOVES to death. "Ahhh i'm so tireddd~" SooYoung whined and took a seat down, sighing in relief that her feet got a break.
JaeJoong looked at her and smiled, "Wanna go home now? You seem very out of it now."
"Hmm..if it's okay with you..,"SooYoung mumbled, thinking Jae might have some more stuff he needed to try.
"No worries! I'm not gonna force you to come along with me everywhere! Come on," JaeJoong held her hand and they walked off to the parking lot.

Little did they know, a girl was following them, watching their every move, and captured any skin-ship on to her phone.
"Who is that girl?" the voice asked itself..and the person ran off...

end of chapter.

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ALRIGHT READDD.
Yes i know, i said i'd update the day after i updated before..and i broke my promise :(
i fail as a writer im sorry.
i knew i had to do this, its just i had no time! i'm SORRY! and .. well my computer was abit..weird here and there so it was like :|
also my relatives from vietnam came by so i was even MORE busy.
i feeeeeel REAAAALLLY bad :(
i'm extremely sorry guys :(
*sigh.
and sorry if it isnt as good! i've been obsessed with yunjae, i couldnt really write jaejoong with anyone else, but for you guys, i'll keep writin.
i was gonna turn this story to yunjae, but like i had some feeling that some of my readers
didnt like yunjae so i cut that out. maybe i'll make alternate endings :) LOL its just a MAYBE!
sigh, hope you guys are doing well, eating well and have a good time.

also, comment please? helps me write better XD

cheers!