Fan Fiction

Endless Forlorn (completed)

by Mariel D.

Chapter 18

Friends

Hey Guys! Hehe... sorry for not updating. Hope I didn't lose my supporters. ='(

Hayzt. GuiLun's so silent now. We can't get any news from them. Just hope that Pi Li MIT2's rommor is true. Hope that they'll gonna film it again. ^^ Let's all pray for it to happen. =)

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RECAP

I’m so nervous now, I can feel they were staring at us, Li Quan threw the bathrobe at the sand and puts his arm around me. He whispered, “I can see they’re fascinated by you.” Said Li Quan. I asked him, “R-really?” I smiled and he replied “Yeah”

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=LI QUAN’S POV=

I noticed she’s glancing back every now and then. “What’s wrong?” I asked her but she just smiled and shook her head. I wonder why is this so… I looked back once and saw a guy, also looking at our direction, hmm…

“Hey Gui, Let’s swim” I smiled.

=GUIGUI’s POV=

“Swim?” I asked him in assurance. He nodded. But… I’m scared that the scenery on my dreams would happen. I sat on the sand “I… don’t want to” I told him. “Why?” he asked

“I’m… I’m scared,” I told him honestly. He smiled and reached for my hands but I didn’t let him catch it. I know he would pull and dragged me to the beach “Come on!” He told me. “If anything goes wrong, I’ll save you” He smiled.

I stand slowly hesitant of what I am doing. I don’t know why I have so much trust on him, but I just let myself.

A moment later, I was enjoying his company when a wave just pulled me further. “L… Li Quan!” I reached at his hands. “What’s wrong?” He asked me again. “I… I’m already cold.” I made excuses. “Oh…” He reacted

After we’re out of the water, I went directly at our room still wearing my suit. No problem with him, he can just grab another girl and have fun.

I sealed the door behind me; I sat at the floor and started to cry. Actually, I’m awfully scared and nervous when swimming earlier. Did he know that my Mother actually died because of a accident on an open water? I was so scared. I cried continuously.

Suddenly, I saw a hand in front of me; I looked up, “Aaron?” I blubbered. I looked around the room and saw no one there. I didn’t accept Aaron’s hand and instead, continued to cry. I felt warm hands touched mine. He pulled me up and let me sat on the bed.

What is he doing? He gave me a robe and says “Faster, go and change your clothes. I’ll wait for you here and we’ll go outside. Everyone is there.” He told me as he position himself on his bed. I nodded uncertainly.

=HEBE’S POV=

I’m now heading at Calvin’s room to invite them. This morning, we decided to have dinner all together. If this won’t work, then I guess we’ll have to stay here in the beach like forever. Teachers definitely won’t let us out if it’s always like this. As I was walking through the hallway, I have this huge smile on my face. I’m always hoping this day would come, the day that I don’t have any opponents anymore.

I knocked lightly at the door. As I prepare for my second thump, a very huge and warm hug welcomed me with him saying “MEI!” I got shocked. “Wei! Calvin!” I shouted. He glanced through me. As he stare at me, his smile faded away. “Hehe… Sorry. I thought you were…” He explained partially. I smiled “It’s okay. Are you still in on our dinner?” I asked him. His smile formed once again on his face “Sure!” he told me. I walked with him throughout the way.

=AARON’S POV=

I was lying on my bed, looking at my wristwatch every now and then. Why isn’t she done yet? I sat up and walked nearer to the door. As I prepared to knock, the door suddenly opened. I was shocked and speechless. GuiGui asked me “What’s wrong with you?” she asked me. I didn’t mind her and sat again on my bed back-facing her. She was still wearing her robe. “Wei, faster” I told her as I was still facing the opposite side.

I turned to look at her. I was surprise seeing her removing her robe. I blushed madly as I change my view. This is awkward. “I’ll wait for you outside.” I told her and hurriedly went outside. Right after I closed the door behind me, it opened again, I saw GuiGui “Let’s go” she told me. That’s fast eh?

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=GUIGUI’S POV=

At around 8:00 pm Jiro’s finally done with his cooking, we sat at the sand and eat our dinner. I looked up before eating. It’s full moon, why does every time I sat nearby the sea, the feeling is always like this? I changed my view to looked at them and noticed Aaron, looking up at the moon too. I didn’t mind it and just continued eating.

All dinner long, I’m the only one who’s not talking. I kept silence until the end of dinner.
A moment later, midnight, we were all lying on the sand forming a one straight line.
We all stare at the sky, that shinning stars with that yellowish moon beside. “Amazing” I told myself. This is the most wonderful day I ever had. All night, I spent the night with them.

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Haiyzt.... Sorry for this chapter Guys! I know it wasn't good and it's short. BUT I tell you, Next chapter will be awesome! I PROMISE! haha, If I told you I promise, I mean it. ^^

Even though this chapter sucks, PLEASE comment guys. I really THANK YOU for your comments. I just got 11 comments from you and I'm EXTREMELY happy that many of you guys gave an effort of leaving a comment.

So,,, see you next Saturday? I promise I'll come back with a great chapter. ^^

-June 14, 2009 / Sunday
-9:30 evening Philippine's time