Fan Fiction |
by Sorrow aka IiI Sorrow IiI
I know I’m not the best when it comes to length but I’ll try to improve on that. I am attempting to shorten my stories without excluding the important details of future writing endeavors. I’m sure many of you know how wordy I am so it would be a rather difficult to attempt.
The interests, you, the readers have shown in my stories are greatly cherished. I am thrilled to read of your enthusiasm. I actually do have more stories ‘floating around’. Therefore, if anyone cares to read them, please follow the URL below and click on the first link (left hand side) titled, “MY STORIES”.
Note: Newer stories should be on the 2nd page.
http://www.geocities.com/sorrows_corner/index
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Following is just my replies to your final comments. The feedback/comment board cuts off long replies so I decided to post it here with your original comments so you can refer to them.
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elitekat -- 27 November 2004 at 12:27 a.m.
Hi!! This is my first comment but I've been following your story for a while now and use to be a silent reader. I must say that your story KICKS ass!!! I like the twists and turns. But I'm sadden by the fact that CHarlene was used by the guy she loves and her sister. Everyone seems to kinda win except Char and Michelle :( Just wanted to say since your story is completing that it was a pleasure and please inform us when you're writing a new story. I'll be the first to read it :)
-- elitekat --
Wow! I’m glad you commented. Thank you very much. I originally wanted to make Edison really love Charlene but then I didn’t think it was realistic to his character. So what I did was had him care/like her but retain his selfish persona than actually loving her fully and completely. I felt that fit his character more. As for Michelle, I never planned on her becoming evil or anything like that so the way she ended was also much unexpected for me.
Are you a fan of anyone in particular? I noticed you mentioned Charlene. I am currently in the process of writing, “The Transporters II: Healing Crystals” which is an ancient story which she has a role in. Furthermore, I have completed stories which she is in also.
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/IiIsorrowIiI_6 [The Transporters II: Healing Crystals]
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/IiIsorrowIiI [ The Transporters I: Map of Conquest]
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SNowbEar*@* -- 27 November 2004 at 1:55 a.m.
Well, a so-called happy ending to me..finally after a long period of ctaching up wif ur story,this has come 2 a end..I pity Michelle n Charlene..haiz..nothg much 2 say
But in conclusion,ur story was FABULOUS!
N I suppose that at the last part of the story,Nic n Nnadia saw 2 person who look exactly like Joey n Ekin,rite?
Haha..
Hope 2 c u startin on a story soon!
Great jOB!cHEERS!
-- SNowbEar*@* --
“So-Called Happy Ending” I presume is better than a “Not Happy Ending”, huh? I also pitied Charlene as I wrote her ending. I honestly didn’t plan it to end that way. She was supposed to run off with Edison and he was to realize he loved her more than himself, but oh well. Sorrow’s fingers have a mind of its own.
I decided to let the readers decided who Nicholas and Nnadia saw but isn’t it obvious? *LOL*
If you want to read a light-hearted story I have on Charlene, Gillian, Edison, Nicholas and Joey. FYI: It’s complete already so no need to wait for updates. You can follow this link:
[A Thin Line Between Love & Hate]
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/IiIsorrowIiI_3
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dawnprayer -- 27 November 2004 at 4:14 a.m.
So is it a happy ending?..but its so sad when i read the last 2 chaps.!but glad Tavia and ray got together..Sorrow is amazing!!its very very well written ..can't wait for more of ur stories..i still feel kinda sad now..haha..weird..
GREAT JOB!
-- dawnprayer --
Glad I was able to produce that effect on you. It’s your call on if the ending was happy or sad. I wrote that Nnadia never saw Ekin’s corpse so that it leaves leeway for “the man” to actually be Ekin; however, when I ended it with a girl walking up to them saying “the man” was her brother it challenged that thought. Based on that, I felt the reader could conjure up something to fit how a person can look like the both of them. It would be a diminutive chance; however one’s imagination can go wild with possibilities.
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geeky girl -- 27 November 2004 at 4:24 a.m.
thanks for giving ray and tav a happy ending...perhaps it's poetic justice as both people have been good and kind hearted all their lives and never killed anyone... and a big thank you for finishing this fic. i'm very happy and pleased to hear that ray and tav survived (also very happy that ray only thought of tav even when he was about to die although i wished you'd write more about them). anyhow, looking forward to your next fanfic with them!
-- geeky girl --
Yes, indeed it was my idea of poetic justice, since Raymond & Tavia from the beginning to end were always good. They were more like the innocent bystanders that were drawn into this chaos and turmoil. I wanted to include more on them; however, I didn’t know how else to describe how happy and relieved they were through Nnadia’s perspective. Therefore, resulting in a brief summary of them in the Epilogue.
Did you think I wouldn’t finish it? I’ve never left anything I’ve done in life incomplete and I highly doubt I would leave any of my stories on Winglin incomplete. For now, I am much too absorbed into them to abandon them. But of course who knows what will happen in life. Maybe one day I will not finish a story.
I haven’t posted it yet, but I’m working on a story with Raymond & Tavia called “Hope & Dreams” I named after a reader with the pseudonym, ‘Hope and Dreams’. A spark of inspiration hit me when I read those words so I plotted out a story. It’s still in the works because I have 3 floating around Winglin, however I made a poster for it already on my website because I’m contemplating on whether or not I could handle 4 stories.
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MoonLight -- 27 November 2004 at 6:41 a.m.
Awww... sad ending! And I'm guessing that the guy looked like Ekin? LoLz.
Yeah, I watched both of them but I didn't get to watch the last chapter of "a Knot to Treasure". Well, nnadia died in 'Instincts', so did Ekin die in 'AKTT'?
Twin brothers isn't all that I rekon. It was out on TVBJ, but I didn't pay thaqt much attentio to it, as much as I love Tavia, Ray and Ron. It lagged on for 40 episodes, with no real development...
I don't watch AVT. Quite unfortunate really.T
-- MoonLight --
Hi Moonlight! Totally missed you! You absolutely disappeared. But I’m glad you’re back. Sorry the ending was sad for Nicholas and Joey. I’m sure you’re ready to ring out my neck; however, when I wrote Joey dying in Nicholas’s arms, I couldn’t help thinking about your reaction. Didn’t seem like you were surprised, so I’m sure you expected it. Wasn’t it inevitable? You know how Sorrow is! *LOL* I always have the itch to kill someone and I’m very willing to kill of my main characters.
Well no, Ekin didn’t die in “Knot to Treasure” but he died in “Zu Mountain Saga.” KTT actually has a sweet but open-ended conclusion. Nnadia & Ekin got together but whether Marianne was pregnant with Ekin’s child was left open to the audience. The last scene is Ekin waiting for a pregnant Nnadia to get off work when he spots Marianne. He was about to greet her from afar when he pauses because he noticed her carrying a baby. He pauses wondering if the child is his then Nnadia comes out and notices him staring so she looks too. But Marianne and the baby are gone, so she asks him what he was looking at. His response was “Nothing” and they happily walk away hand in hand teasing each other.
I haven’t even had the chance to watch “Twin of Brothers” yet; however I’ve already been informed of the ending. Hearing it is already a downer but I'm still expecting to watch it because my cousin and sister have developed a great liking for Raymond & Tavia. So they're going to rent it and only watch the first half! *LOL*
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Karebear -- 27 November 2004 at 3:22 p.m.
I LOVE this story, I agree with elitekat that this story kicks... (ah) ...butt. So sad to see some of the characters die (Ekin, Joey, Charlance...). They killed people and made mistakes, but they were GOOD in the end. I like how you ended this story. This story is a bit hard to end because throughout this story it has been dark and depressing, up to when Ekin, Nnadia, Nic. and Joey were finally together and happy, but there was still a hint of sadness with Raymond and Tavia. Then it became really sad and depressing again with all the deaths. What I'm trying to say is that if you made the ending all happy with everyone getting what they want, it wouldn't match the rest of your story. And if everyone died in the story, some readers might not take that well. But you had a nice balance of both, with the death of some characters and letting the ones that deserves to live, live. You made every chapter exciting and emotional, with twist and turns, love and hate and you carried it all the way to the end. With that I give you a standing ovation. You MOST definitely have talent, and hope you run with it. Hope to read more of your stories soon.
-- Karebear --
Thanks for the compliments. I am extremely ecstatic yet fretful when hearing praises. Not because I question the sincerity, but because I am uncertain that I can continue providing interesting story lines, for I am very uncreative and unimaginative. Therefore I thank you very much for you praises.
Yes, this was a dark and depressing story which is why I couldn’t let even my main characters live, such as Joey, Ekin, Charlene, Edison, Gillian, etc. And if you noticed I killed off the characters that were bad or you can say killed people before. Only reason Michelle wasn’t killed off was because she actually had mental problems which lead to her extremities. I don’t believe killing off everyone would have been such a great idea because it didn’t seem appropriate.
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Lil_Stranger -- 27 November 2004 at 7:38 p.m.
LIKE the ending?! i LOVE it! it's so cool! too bad they all died, leaving nnadia, nic, ray, and tavia behind. hmmm.... i wonder if that man that bought ethan the toy was ekin, and that girl was joey. hmmmmmmmm...... it makes you wonder and that's the thing that makes the ending so, so.... oh my, i'm speechless! all i have to say is, this has gotta be one of the BEST fic i've read EVER!!!!! remember to email me if there's another story w/ nic, joey, twins, and edison in it!
-- Lil_Stranger --
I left the ending so you could wonder. Isn’t Sorrow evil! *LOL* I wrote that Nnadia never saw Ekin’s corpse so that “the man” might actually be Ekin; however, you need to remember Joey died in Nicholas’s arms. So it might not be them but then again there are many possibilities for your imagination.
Are you currently reading “The Transporters” Nicholas, Joey, Twins, and Edison are in those two also except they are ancient stories. I don’t know if you’re interested in that. Well here’s thje link anyways.
[The Transporters II: Healing Crystals]
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/IiIsorrowIiI_6
[ The Transporters I: Map of Conquest]
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/IiIsorrowIiI
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Desiree -- 28 November 2004 at 9:59 a.m.
Sad story... 1st story Michelle is the villian...
-- Desiree --
Sad? Yes, that’s why my pseudonym is “SORROW” Can’t get any sadder than me. *heehee* actually that’s not true some writers have sadder story, however I still believe I have a more depressing life.
Really? I didn’t know that my story is the 1st with Michelle as the villain. That’s interesting to know. But I usually have all my characters the villain at one point. It gives a fresh and new angle to the celebrities.
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Odie -- 28 November 2004 at 2:01 p.m.
I just love your stories Sorrow... finished it just now... you are SOOOOOOOOOO good at tying things together... everything in this story revolves around desire and how it drives people and motivate them... love it!! Great story.. and yes, do continue with the other stories!! I will be waiting!
Odie..........
-- Odie --
Wow Odie! I didn’t know you were still reading. Glad to know you enjoyed it. Thank you for your praises. I’ve always tried to tie up my stories and give them good titles. However some of them might not be so great. Sorry my updating had lagged. I’ve become swamped by the daily tribulations of my miserable life.
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Kathy -- 29 November 2004 at 6:23 p.m.
HOW COULD YOU!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILL EKIN!!!
but that's what make u better writer than others. u don't make your story about what the readers want only. u concentrate on the plots. i like the name ethan. it's really nice. was it ekin she saw or was it a look alike? i'm thinking a look alike because there was a joey look alike for nic too. she say he washer bro so that's what i'm thinking. GREAT STORY. LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!
i'm reading the other stories so update them soon
-- Kathy --
Yes, I knew you would yell at me. It’s in your nature to. *LOL* FYI, I do care what my readers think, however I believe a great story needs a great plot so I decided to concentrate on the plots more that's all. Yeah I got the name Ethan from the cute guy I'm paired up with this year. *LOL* He's so adorable. I like the name too.
You take a guess at the look alikes. What do you think?
And I've tried to update the other stories. I'll finish them before psoting more. Don't worry.
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LazZaNg3l -- 4 December 2004 at 11:53 p.m.
Sorry!!! I couldn't read your ending till like now. Since there was something wrong with my computer this pass few weeks also i was so busy and caught up with school. Omg! i read the ending! It was SAD!!!!
JOey DIED!!
But then at the end there is another girl that showed up. could she be the one who looked like joey? or was it the man who looked like Ekin. lols! i'm not sure. Man if only i was here when u updated the epilogue. Dangit.
Anyways!! Very good ending! i Liked it. It not too sad but not too happy. ehehe
Yay for raymond and Tavia! they ended up together. They are my best couple in this story.
i love them two. eheheh I think that's all i could say right now. Since all i could think about is Tavia and Raymond. The really left a deep impression for me in this fanfic. ekeke
HOpe to read more of your stories!
Keep up the good job! And i truly apologize for not reading till like now. :) Forgive me! there are other fanfic's that i missed too. ehehe
-- LazZaNg3l --
No problem girl! I always enjoy reading you comments anytime. Even if the story was long finished and you commented I would still be excited to hear what you had to say. Glad there was some element of the story that you enjoyed. Looking forward to see you on more of my comment boards. Oh and I decided to let the readers decided who Nicholas and Nnadia saw but isn’t it obvious? *wink wink*
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mee_pink -- 4 December 2004 at 10:24 p.m.
Hey, I love your stories. They are great. Keep up the great work!
-- mee_pink --
Glad to know you enjoyed my stories. Hope to see more of you on my other story comment boards.
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