Fan Fiction |
by Kiki
“She’s gone….” Raymond continually repeated. “Myolie’s gone, she’ll never be back….”
Nancy folded her arms, “Am I suppose to care. Do you expect me to comfort you back?” she asked mockingly. Do you realize how much I hate her right now? She’s always trying to ruin my life! She stole my parents away from me in my childhood and now she’s stolen you.”
“Myolie didn’t steal me.” Raymond defended. “All she ever wanted was for you to be happy.”
“Make me happy?” Nancy laughed sarcastically, “More like make me miserable.”
“Do you realize how much she cared about you? How much she has sacrificed for you? She was sent to take your life, but she chose not to because you’re her sister and she loves you.”
“Stop giving me this pathetic story about how much she’s sacrificed.”
“Myolie is an angel of death” Raymond explained, “She rather sacrifice herself so you wouldn’t have to die!”
“She….” Nancy thought back to ten years ago, Myolie was hit by the truck. “That’s how she lived…no….” she didn’t want to believe it. “That’s not true.” She shook her head. Nancy’s cell phone rang, she slowly answered it, “Hello….Mom, clam down first, tell me again slowly what happened.” Nancy’s hand, holding the phone, fell to the side of her body.
“What’s wrong?” Raymond asked.
“Myolie was hit by a truck.” Nancy answered.
“Hit by a truck?” Raymond was shocked, “but I saw her vanish….”
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Nancy and Raymond arrived at the hospital. They saw Michael hugging Sheren, comforting her in the corner. His eyes were red with tears. Sheren continued to sob, “Why did she have to be taken away from us…” The medical personnel were pulling the cover over Myolie’s body.
Raymond walked over pulled down the white sheet to see Myolie’s face for the last time. Nancy looked horrified seeing Myolie pale and motionless. There was a huge pile of blood cloths next to the bed. Myolie looked the way she had in the accident ten years ago.
“She can’t be dead.” Nancy refused to believe, “She survived it once….she can’t die now. Wake up!” Nancy shouted, “You can’t just leave like that!” Nancy cried. Raymond wrapped his arm around Nancy’s shoulder. She buried her head on his shoulder, “Tell me she’s not dead….”
“I really wish I could….”
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Tears dropped from Myolie’s eyes, “I’m sorry for hurting you all. If I had left earlier, then maybe none of this would have happened.” Myolie remember not leaving the first time because she was afraid what would happen between her parents and Nancy. She was sure they would have blamed her death on Nancy and their relationship would fall apart. She pleaded for a second chance; she swore she would complete her task, and so she was given the chance and was allowed to return.
The second time she was involved in the accident was a reminder of her promise and uncompleted task. She should have left then; she should have returned and declared failure, but she had grown close to her parents and she wanted to repair their relationship with Nancy. But more than anything, she wanted to get Nancy’s forgiveness before leaving, so she chose to stay.
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Kevin set the single white rose down on the tombstone. “I’m not sure what happened that night, but I can tell that you had something to do with it. Thank you for saving my life and letting me have the chance to stand her right now. Thank you my savior. You are truly an angel.”
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“I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!” Nancy screamed at the top of her lungs, and she began crying hysterically. “I hate you for always playing the good person and making me the bad guy. I hate you for being so considerate and always sacrificing yourself.” Nancy dried up her tears, “I want you to know that I’m sorry. I’m sorry for blaming you in the past. I want to tell you thank you for everything you have done for me.” She bit her lip to hold back her tears, “I have come to realize that you cannot be so stubborn about some matters. You have to learn to let go. It’s really hard to hate someone. If only I would have realized this soon, I would have seen how wonderful you were. No matter what happens we’ll always be sisters. I’m not mad at you and I hope you won’t be mad at me.”
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“Why were you so cruel?” Raymond asked. “Why did you choose to leave me? Do you know how much I miss you?” I love you and I always will.” Raymond placed down his rose before leaving.
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Hope everyone was satisfied with the ending. I’ve really enjoyed writing this story. I know it was sad…my second time of not letting Rayolie be together…. : (
I guess, I’ll go ahead a let you all know, I am starting a few new stories….
One of which will feature Rayolie called Impostor => www.winglin.net/fanfic/Kiki7 and the other will be a collection of short stories….two stories will have Rayolie and one of Fenolie called Just Once => www.winglin.net/fanfic/Kiki8 I do not have anything posted yet, but the forwards should be up soon!
Liz sis – Awww….sorry for making you depressed…I guess this was even more depressing since Rayolie didn’t end up. But no worries, have other stories coming along….so may the next Rayolie story I write they will be together….Yup, Raymond told Nancy. Life = stress for me too….especially this weekend and next week! Ugh….
toby – It reminded me of TOB too….but Ray didn’t really kiss Li Qian in TOB, but I made Rayolie kiss. Hehe…Nope, Raymond and Nancy didn’t end up together like you guessed. Thanks for commenting!
nachos_ger – Nancy felt pretty guilty after finding out the truth….this was just a depressing story in general….what’s wrong with me? Why have I gotten so sad….
MistyK – Hope you found lots of stuff in the Rayolie thread to cheer you back up. I think I need to go again to cheer myself up….lol….re-watch all the clips….
raylluvec – Thanks for the comment sis!
WaterWonders: Thanks for the compliment! I’m actually really satisfied with this story myself. Aiya….I feel so bad about “Always By Your Side” because I just haven’t felt like writing a new chapter for it…..and I’m planning to start new stories. But don’t worry, I will eventually finish it….even if it means very slowly….
melted: Thanks for the word! It means a lot to me! Nancy did hate Myolie, but she learned what Myo did for her and felt very guilty…..Nancy ended up forgiving Myo and they became good sisters again….kinda…lol….this is the really the last chapter! .
hkangel: So great to see your comment sis! Haha….I think I’m anticipating Kevolie a bit too much, so I figured they won’t be in a series together anytime soon since they are both busy filming different series, but hopefully after Myolie’s done with WOIL and possibly the series with Gallen, they’ll both have time to film a series together.
mystery: The kiss was just for you! Myolie had to go back to being an angel and couldn’t be with Ray, but he’ll always love her.
PinkAngel: Sorry to disappoint you sis….since it was a rather sad ending….I guess it’s the thought that Rayolie won’t be together in TDOL so, I had to make this a sad ending…and not have them end up together.
incognito: The kiss is one of my favorite part in the story. Nope, no twist….Myolie’s gone for good…a sequel???? Haven’t thought about it…I’ll consider though….I’ll be writing other stories…hopefully, I’ll see you then.