Fan Fiction

Love On Cloud Nine ***Completed***

by Lavendar_Bluez

Chapter 19

Coma

To Readers: During the time you are reading the writing in the [] (first part only). Pretend you are listening to a heart beat.
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This part--->[

"Dont worry!"

"Hold on!"

"You'll make it..."

"We're almost there!"

"Please..."

"I..love you..."

"...Tavia" ]<--You can stop here

[Hospital]

Leila, Nancy, Sheren (Sheren Tang), Myolie, Raymond, Bosco and .. Ron were waiting outside the operation room.

The girls were crying hard and the guys were silent and down. Ron pounded his fist against the wall. Slowly, a tear slid down his cheek.

"Why? Why are you so foolish?" Ron thought.

[Flash back]

"RON!"Tavia yells.

"Huh-" but before Ron knew it, Tavia had pushed him aside. But Tavia couldnt save herself -a truck hit her.

"Tavia!" Ron yells as he run towards Tavia. He held her in his arms and quickly called an ambulance.

[End of flashback]

The light from the operation room turned off. A female surgeon/doctor (Charmaine Sheh)came out from the operation room.

"How is my daughter, doctor?" Sheren asked.

"We've done the best we can, she is alive and if she had arrived another minute later she would have been dead. We have aided her cuts but she is still in coma. Whether or not she wakes up is up to her. I'm sorry.." the surgeon replies.

"Thank..thank you very much!" Leila said in relief. The surgeon nodded and left.

"Please be ok, Tavia!" Sheren pleaded. Leila started to cry again, Bosco tried to comfort her.

"We..sniff.. we cant give up! We have to give Tavia full support!" Nancy exclaimed.

[Hospital, Night time]

It was quiet and all that could be heard was the beeping from Tav'a pulse rate machine. Everyone was gathered around Tavia.

"If..if I didn't like you..sis and you would have had a longer relationship...I'm so sorry.." Leila apologized to Ron. She turned to hug Bosco tight, Ron shook his head but still had his eyes on Tavia.

"Auntie, it's so late now! Raymond and I will drive you guyz home.." Nancy stuttered. Sheren nodded and right before she,Leila,Bosco,Nancy and Raymond left.. she planted a kiss on Tavia's forhead.

Be strong Tavia! Nancy prayed, and they left. The only ones left were Myolie and Ron.