| Fan Fiction |
by BoBoLi0us
RUBRIC
- Story Title - 6/8
The title was very befitting for the story because it was all about the memories you had for that person. But it’s not very eye catching since I’ve seen lots of stories with the same title.
- Appearance - 11/12
You picked a very nice color scheme and the poster was well made. But some words are a little blurry and hard to see.
- Forewords – 9/10
You got me right at the forewords. It made me sit up and read your story thoroughly. But it made rather think that he left her because he didn’t like the girl anymore.
- Plot - 13/15
The plot was good. I’ve read other stories with almost the same plot though but yours was a little more realistic. It made me think that this really happened.
- Flow -8/8
It had a good flow. You didn’t skip right into a part without telling the reader what happened before that. You left me no questions as to what happened in between.
- Originality/Creativity -9/12
I’ve read other stories just like this but this is much more realistic and it feels like a true story, just like what I said earlier.
- Characterization – 5/7
I didn’t understand much the character of the girl but Jay’s was perfectly written. He came alive in my imagination easily.
- Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary -11/13
You had a few mistypes and mistakes with your tenses but those are very minimal.
- Writing style - 8/10
I liked the fact that you indicated the time but I got a little confused with all those big spaces.
- Enjoyment - 4/5
I enjoyed the story very much except some parts which were a bit generic lines. I always enjoy a good at the end of a very nice story.
Sub total 84/100
Bonus 5/5
I’ll let you in on a little secret. I could very much see myself in her shoes.
Total: 89/100
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How is it possible to know MORE about Jay than the girl.
Oh gawd.
Anyway, thank you.