| Fan Fiction |
by BoBoLi0us
Story Title 7/8-Nice title.It fits with the story.
Appearance 10/12-You made the poster, right?Its pretty!But the background's kind of plain.
Forewords 9/10-I know you right the forewords like this.(I'm one of your silent readers)But the thing is, you need to put some information about the reader and Taec.
Plot 15/15-The plot is nice!I read one fanfic like this before and never get bored with it because she added twists and turns.
Flow 8/8-It wasn't slow or fast.It was at the right pace.
Originality/Creativity 11/12-Like I said, I've read some
Characterization 7/7-I like the fact that you didn't just throw the characters at one scene.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary 12/13-The only thing I saw wrong is 'than' and 'then'.
Than means: A particle expressing comparison, used after certain adjectives and adverbs which express comparison or diversity, as more, better, other, otherwise, and the like.
Then means:Soon afterward, or immediately; next; afterward.
Writing style 10/10-I like your writing style!Its understandable and readable!What more do you need!
Enjoyment 4/5-Since it was obvious, because of the title it kind of spoiled the ending but I still enjoyed it!
Sub total 93/100
Bonus 5/5-Good luck!And write more!
Total: 98/100
---------------------------------------------------
Thank you!