| Fan Fiction |
by cutterpillow ♥ CMH
Title: 5/5
From the title, I thought that maybe it would go similar to the lines of the American movie "She's All That" with Freddie Prinze Jr. and Rachel Leigh Cook (popular guy makes a bet with his friend that he can make any girl popular, and the artsy outcast is chosen). But, I liked the fresh twist you gave it :D
Poster/Background: 10/10
It was very clean and neat, professional-like; Love the quote too ♥
Forewords: 10/10
I like how you kept it short and to the point, enough to capture the reader's attention but not bore them.
Plot: 13/15
The plot is used often, but I do like the twists you put in (the scooter being painter pink for example :D, loved that one)
Creativity/Originality: 13/15
Since I have seen so many stories based on the same line, I docked a few points. But, there were parts that were definitely new and individual that I hadn’t seen in the other stories, so I didn’t dock that many.
Flow: 10/10
The flow of the story was steady and easy to follow.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10
You had a few mistakes here and there, but for someone who’s first language isn’t English, I feel you did quite well. :D
Characterization: 10/10
I love how you made the feelings of the character shown through dialogue instead of long, winding sentences that would bore the reader to death.
Writing Style: 10/10
I like that you didn’t use the script way of writing, and I love that you used paragraphs instead of a bunch of one line sentences to tell your story.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
It was very enjoyable :D
Total: 93/100
Thank you for requesting at 7SM :D
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DP: 09.24.09
THANKS DJalex! :)