| Fan Fiction |
by cutterpillow ♥ CMH
Poster/Background: 10/10
Very cute and I love Miura Haruma!! He’s so adorable in the poster!!
Forewords: 10/10
Nice forewords you have here. A great little summary there!
Plot: 15/15
The plot was so GOOD! I LOVED IT a lot, and never read any stories like yours before.
Flow: 8/10
I think the flow was a bit fast when they both exchanged numbers, but overall that, I still enjoyed the story. :D
Creativity/Originality: 15/15
You’re very creative with what you write and I admire your work!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabularies: 10/10
You know your spellings, grammars, and vocabularies a lot!
Characterization: 10/10
I loved how you describe the two main characters in the story. How they were both popular in their own ways! :D
Writing Style: 8/10
Eh.. Your writing style needs a lot of work! Maybe you might just need to reproof your reading only, that’s all. (:
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I enjoyed your story lots, and I cried at the end of your story when Miura Haruma took the microphone and said, “I love KATO ROSA!” It melted my heart away.
Sub Total: 96/100
Bonus: 5/5
I give you 5 bonus points because I love the way you worked with your story and how your creativity made this story good! GOOD JOB!
Total: 101/100
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DP: 10.15.09
OMGG!!! thanks BBT! that was the highest score I ever had!!! hahahaha!