| Fan Fiction |
by cutterpillow ♥ CMH
RUBRIC
- Story Title - 7/8 It would definitely catch my eye. And I do believe I've clicke don this fic, but didn't have time to read it.
- Appearance - 11/12 I like how it looked. I like the simple clean ones. It went with the story.
- Forewords - 6/10 You gave the plot right there and gave some background on the main characters in the plot description at the same time. But I would have liked it better if you went a little more in depth about the main characters.
- Plot - 15/15 I have yet to read a story with the same plot. But soon there will be because I am writing a fic with the same basic plot.
- Flow - 8/8 It flowed. You did not do any time lapses or anything like that. I followed the story perfectly.
- Originality/Creativity - 12/12 I have not read a fanfic like this. But I am writing a fic with the same plot. A Mrs. nerd and Mr. popular fall in love. So, you are the first I have read with this plot.
- Characterization - 7/7 I like how you made them popular in their own ways instead of making the nerd just a blatant loser and total outcast. You made it so Rosa had friends, and wasn't alone.
- Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary - 12/13 English isn't your first language, and I am glad you told everyone that before writing. If you didn't I would have cut you down a lot more because spelling and grammar are everything to me. And I know we writers make mistakes, but if it's constant then there is no excuse. Your mistakes weren't.
- Writing style - 9/10 I love the descriptive style. You didn't use play-style {Person: blahblahblah} and took the time to write it this way. I also like how you capped the words that were suppose to be emphasized. Though the '**' turned me off. D:
- Enjoyment - 5/5 I enjoyed it. Since this is the first story I have read with this plot, it's not like I can compare it with another story.
Sub total - 92/100
Bonus - 5/5 I thoroughly enjoyed this fic and hope that my fic turns out to be just as good, or better ( ;''] ), than yours.
Total: - 97/100
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DP: 10.17.09
Thanks Simba of E-D! :)