| Fan Fiction |
by ShadowYin
Reviewer's Note: This review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding with the author or anything of that sort. This a honest review on a story. I'm seriously sorry if I'm harsh or rude.
Title: 4/5
*The story's title played a significant role. It was suitable with the story.
Poster/Background: 5/10
*The poster was great but I cannot say the same for the background. Since the background is the same colour with the poster, it does not appeal the poster or the background.
Forewords: 4/5
*Your managed to show the overview of the story through your forewords.
Plot: 9/15
*Your plot was good. It was quite sad but yet realistic.
Flow: 4/10
*You need to work on the flow. It was unbalanced.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/15
*There were not any major mistakes in spelling or grammar. Your vocabulary was too simple.
Characterization: 4/10
*You explained about your lead character's feelings well but it was not enough. You need to specify more on EunHyuk and Junsu.
Originality: 6/10
*Your plot was cliche but yet still interesting.
Writing style: 9/10
*Your writing style was simple yet good.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
*I enjoyed it very much.
Overall score: 63/100
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Thank you :)