Fan Fiction

A Lasting Friendship [ completed ]

by Scarlett

Chapter 13

At Joe's Garage

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They followed Rain all the way to Je's Garage, a really huge garage to fix cars. Frankie was Rain parked his car right in front of the garage. Not wanting Rain to see his car, he parked at the end of the street. That way Rain can't see them and they can see her.

Rain got out of the car and took the briefcase which held the money. She looked at the briefcase and then at the garage door. I'm coming Mom, she thought. She took one last glance up and down the street. She sighed and knocked on the garage door.

The door rumbled. It slowly raised up to the roof. Rain looked inside. It was dark. She couldn't see anything.

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"Guys!" Raymond whispered to Frankie and Michelle, "The garage door opened."

Michelle looked at Rain. Frankie said, "What should we do?"

Michelle opened the car door and got outside.

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"Hello?" Rain slowly walked in. "I'm Rain. I got the money," she looked around, but all she could see was nothing. "Hello?" She repeated. She stopped walking. All of a sudden the whole garage lit up, blinding Rain's eye. Rain dropped the briefcase and lifted her arms over her face.

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Michelle walked toward the garage. Franki stopped her by pulling her arm, "Michelle, what are you doing?" Frankie asked.

"I'm going inside."

"What?"

"Don't worry. I remember being in there before, with you Frankie."

Frankie looked at the garage, "Oh yeah. I remember the garage has a backdoor."

"So we can go in there through the backdoor," Raymond said.

Frankie and Michelle nodded.

"Then come on!" Raymond ran toward the garage. Frankie and Michelle exchanged anxious looks and followed Raymond. They are going to save Rain, and her mother.

~THE CAST~

Raymond Lam Fung... ...Raymond Lam
Frankie Lam Mun Loong... ...Frankie Lam
Michelle Yip Suen... ... Michelle Yip
Rain Li Choi Wa... ... Rain Li
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[January 08, 2004]