Fan Fiction |
by Scarlett
"Hello Rain."
Rain lowered her arms and opened her eyes. In front of her was a red mustang car. A man was sitting on the driver's seat. Four men dressed in black were standing beside each side of the car. Rain heard a noise behind her. She turned and saw the garage door closing. She looked at the man in the car. Breating hard.
The man spreaded his arms and smiled in a cruel way. He opened the car door and got out. Rain backed up. Two men from nowhere stopped her and forced her onto the ground.
"What are you doing? She's our guest!" He walked toward the two men and slapped both of them. "She's here to bring us money," the two men realeased her. "Here," He extended his hand in ffont of her.
She didn't take it. She stood up by herself. "Your... your money's in there," She pointed at the brifcase beside her, "Now... release my mom."
He went up to her, "I will realease you mom," he touched her face, Rain backed up. "Oh yes... forgot to introduce myself. I'm Jack Chung."
"I--I already know. Where's my mom?"
"Where's Raymond Lam?" He asked, looking around.
"I was about to bring him, but he said he will call the police! I was scared, so i pushed him out of the car and drove here by myself.
Jack looked at her with glowing eyes.
* * *
Raymond, Frankie, and Michelle ran quietly to the back of the garage. "Where's the back door?" Raymond asked.
"It should be here, "Michelle said. She was walking toward the left side of the garage. "It is here!" She said happily! A door appeared beside her. She opened it and went inside.
"Wait for us!" Frankie cried. Raymond and Frankie followed her inside.
"Where are you?" Raymond said loudly. The room was dark.
"Shh. Be quiet Raymond," Michelle whispered, "They can hear us, and I'm over here," she took out her keychain, that has a light, out of her pocket and flicked the light open. Raymond and Frankie saw her light and went toward her. "Shh," she whispered again and opened the door she was standing next to. She opened the door a little so she can see the people but they can't see her. Raymond walked closer to Michelle and peered through the crack. In that room he saw....
"Bitch!" Jack slapped Rain and Rain fell onto the floor. Raymond's hand formed into a fist. "I told you to bring him!" He kicked her stomach. Rain screamed. He clapped his hands and two men came up to Rain and started kicking her. he sat on a chair and watched his men kicking her horriblely. A man walked up to him and putted a cigar in his mouth. The litted the cigar up. Jack smoked his cigar happily.
Raymond couldn't take it any longer. He can't just stand there and watch his girlfriend being beaten to death. he pushed the door open.
"Raymond! No!" Frankie and Michelle whispered. Raymond ignored them, "I'm here."
The two men stopped kicking Rain and looked at him. Jack stood up and through his ciagar on the floor. "Ray Ray! You're here!"
"Raymond..." Rain whispered.
Raymond ran to Rain and helped her up. "Are you okay?" he whispered. Rain cried and hugged him. Raymond looked at Jack, "Why do you have to treat her like this?!"
Jack chuckled. He looked at Michelle and Frankie, "Raymond? i never told you to bring your friends," he looked back at Raymond and clapped his hands again.
Everywhere went pitch black. Raymond couldn't see anything. His grip on Rain went tighter. But someone pulled Rain away from him! "Rain!" he shouted. He heard Michelle and Frankie scream. "Michelle! Frankie!" He tried to run to them but he tripped on someone's foot and blacked out.
* * *
Raymond's eyes opened. Everything was blurry and his head was aching really badly. He turned his head to his left and saw Michelle's head was on his shoulder. her eyes were closed. He looked toward his right. Frankie was next to him. Hiw eyes were closed too. He looked across the room and saw Rain there. Her eyes were wide opened, but she was staring at the ground, muttering something and crying at the same time. That's when he noticed that Rain was tied up with a rope. Her hands and legs were tied together. Raymond moved his hand, but he couldn't. He tried to move his leg, he couldn't. he noticed that him, Frankie and Michelle were all tied up.
"You are awake."
Raymond looked up. Jack was standing above him. "Untie me!" He shouted. That woke Frankie and Michelle up.
"What's going on?" Frankie muttered.
"Ahhh! We're tied!" Michelle screeched.
"What?" Frankie moved his hand and feet.
"Stop moving!" Jack said and pointed his gun at Frankie. Frankie froze immediately. He was sweating.
Raymond looked at Frankie, "Untie us!" He said to Jack.
"Oh I will," a man, in a black suit, pulled a chair in front of Raymond. jack sat on it. " I will let you go, until you finish hearing my story."
"So you captured Rain's mom, is not because of money, it's because you want Raymond!" Michelle said angrily.
"What?" Raymond looked at Michelle.
"Smar girl. Too smart. How did you know?" Jack seemed really interested in her.
"When I was you car. If you're poor, you can't afford to have a Mustang."
"This is a garage. That car might not belong to me you know."
"How about all the men you have. They all obey you on your orders!" Jack smiled. "And this room!" Michelle continued, "Look at the furniture and the walls!"
Raymond looked around. I was a big room. The walls and the furniture were beautifully colored. Lots of designs on them. But to Raymond, they are ugly. Frankie looked aroun too. Everywhere seems to have an eerie green glow. He shook.
"Very smart. Now on with my story. Untie him." He said to the man standing behind him. The man untied Raymond and put him on a chair that was in the middle of the room. Another man kicked Michelle to Frankie. Jack walked to Raymond and pointed his gun at Raymond.
"What're you..."
"Do you know why I have to take your chick's mom? It is because if I don't take her, I can never reach you."
Raymond looked at Rain.
"Do you know why I want you?" Raymond looked back at him. "It's because I want you dead."
Michelle and Frankie were helping each other loosening themselves from the ropes.
"If it wasn't for you dad killing my dad, you wouldn't be here."
Raymond smiled, "Go ahead. Kill me! Kill me! After you kill me, my friends will tell the police about all this, and now, who's trouble!"
Jack laughed. "Not if I kill you friends first," two men pointed their guns at Michelle and Frankie.
"You won't."
"I will. But I decide to kill you first," Jack fired his gun at Raymond.
~THE CAST~
Raymond Lam Fung... ...Raymond Lam
Frankie Lam Mun Loong... ... Frankie Lam
Michelle Yip Suen... ... Michelle Yip
Rain Li Choi Wa... ... Rain Li
Chan Fa Sa... ...Jack Chung
Li Ho Man... ... Man #1
Li Ho Sing... ...Man #2
Li Siu Hung... ...Man #3
Un Fong Loong... ...Man #4
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Will Raymond die?
I'm am going to add a new minor to this story. His name will be Ron Ng. He will show up in the next chapter. If you guys want to know stuff about him, just look at the Foreword.=D
PLEASE COMMENT! YOU KNOW THAT I'M LACKING READERS. PLEASE COMMENT! YOU GUYS ARE THE ONLY PEOPLE WHO MAKE ME PROUD!/apart from my family and friends :p
[January 08, 2004]