Fan Fiction |
by Scarlett
Anywayz enjoy for the ppl that doesn't mind if Ray's stupid.
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Raymond quidkly went to the hospital to see Michelle. He saw Frankie and Rain, sitting side-by-side. They looked really sad, especially Frankie. "Frankie!" Raymond ran to Frankie's side, "How's Michelle?" Frankie looked at him with sad eyes, but didn't answer. "Rain?" Raymond went to her, "How's MIchelle?" Rain didn't answer nor looked at him. She just looked at the floor with mean eyes.
"She still didn't pass her dangerous time yet," Frankie said all of a sudden.
Raymond looked at the floor helplessly.
"If it wasn't for you, MIchelle wouldn't be like this."
Raymond looked at Rain. "What are you talking about?"
"What? If it wan't for your precious dad, Michelle and MY MOM wouldn't be like this!" Now Rain was shouting. Everybody in the hospital was looking at Raymond and Rain.
A nurse walked up to Rain, "Excuse me maam, you are not supposed to sho--"
"Shut up!" Rain stood up and pushed the nurse onto the floor. She ran up to Raymond and slapped him. At that same time, Frankie and another nurse tried to pull her away from him. "Raymond Lam!" She yelled as Frankie and the nurse tried to pull Rain farther. "If it wasn't for you, my mom wouldn't be kidnapped! Michelle wouldn't be shot! It's all your fault!"
"I didn't mean to Rain!" Raymond shouted back.
Rain stopped struggling, "I get it. I know why Michelle saved you, she likes you!"
Frankie gripped Rain tighter. Apparently, Rain knew that. "What are you talking about?" Raymond asked Rain, like he doesn't know what she's talking about.
"Don't lie! I know you know that she liked you!" Rain shouted. Then her eyes widened, "You like Michelle!"
Frankie released Rain. He stared at Raymond. Raymond looked at Frankie and then at Rain. "What are you talking about Rain?" Raymond asked her again. He walked up to her, "Rain..." he grabbed her arm.
"Let go of me!" She yelled. She tried to get away from Raymond's grasp.
"Rain! The only girl I love is--"
"Michelle!" She finished her sentence for him. Raymond let go of her arm as she said this. Raymond turned to face Frankie, "Frankie... you know I don't..."
"Michelle is my girlfriend," Frankie started, "Noone can love her... except me!"
"Frankie..."
"Leave!" Frankie pointed at the door. Raymond looked around the hospital. Everybody was staring at him. Even the nurse whoe told Rain not to shout in the hospital stared at him. She didn't move nor complain. "Leave!" Frankie shouted at him again.
Raymond had no choice but to leave. He took one last glance at them and ran out of the hospital, with anger, and sadness.
He ran to a nearby tree and kicked it. "Why?" He shouted. He kept on kicking the tree until his toes starts hurting. He later gave up and sat down, his hands over his face.
"Did you have a fight?"
Raymond looked up. There stood Ron Ng. "What are you doing here?" Raymond asked.
"To see how you are doing."
Raymond stood up. "Why ko you care about me so much... ah SIR?!"
"I don;t. I just apparently came here to check on my friend, and I saw you kicking this tree," Raymond turned his back toward him. "Is it Rain Li and Frankie Lam?"
Raymond turned around. He looked t his eyes. Very familiar... Raymond thought. "Have I met you before?" He finally asked.
"You didn't answer my question," Ron said. He seemed like he dind't want to answer Raymond's question.
Raymond sighed, "Yes...."
"Do you like Michelle?"
Raymond looked at him thoughtfully, "I duuno... I don't know if I really like her."
"How do you fell when she's not around?"
"Scared... and worried... I guess..."
"How about Rain?"
Raymond looked at the hospital's duoble doors, "Not the same as Michelle..."
Ron looked disappointed all of a sudden, "Well... that means you like Michelle more than Rain!"
"I don't know!" Raymond screamed in confusion. He sat back down on the ground.
Ron bent down, "You can see Michelle when Frankie and Rain leave. I'll keep them out of your way."
Raymond looked at him, "Thank you... Ng Sir."
"Call me Ron, if you don't think me as your friend," Ron added disappointedly.
"No," Raymond laughed, "thanks... Ron."
~THE CAST~
Raymond Lam Fung... ... Raymond Lam
Rain Li Choi Wa... ... Rain Li
Frankie Lam Mun Loong... ... Frankie Lam
Ron Ng Chuek Hai... ... Ron Ng
Iun Oi Yi... ... The nurse
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Is this another stupid chap? Plz tell me if it is... about Ray you know...
I tried not to make Ray that stupid... but I want this fic to be kind of a triangle love... Sorry if I confused you...
Plz stay tuned if you want to know which girl Ray will pick... Rain? or Michelle?
In the next chapter: What?????????? Ron likes Michelle too?????
With a bunch of love,
Scarlett - . ~
[January 15, 2004]
P.S. COMMENTS???