Fan Fiction |
by Scarlett
Raymond ran back to the hospital. He looked atound his surroundings. Where is she? He thought.
"Raymond!" He sighed deeply and turned around. There ran Rain, running toward him. She hugged him, "Raymond! I'm sorry I shouted at you! I'm sorry I slapped you! Please don't leave me! Please don't get mad!"
"Rain..." He tried to free himself from Rain's embrace. "Rain... Rain!"
She released him, "What is it Raymond? Are you still mad at me?" She added in a worry whisper.
"Rain... I'm sorry but... we're over," he said quietly.
"What?!" Rain screamed.
"I said... WE ARE OVER!" Raymond screamed back.
"No Ray please..." Rain touched his hand.
He moved his hand away from her, "We are over okay?"
"No!" Rain hugged him again. "We can't be over! I know I'm wrong... I'll change... but we can't be over! I can't lose you! I already lost my mom... I can't LOSE YOU TOO!" She cried
"It's not your fault... it's me. I'm the one who is changing, not you."
Rain stopped crying, "Is it Michelle Yip?"
"It has nothing to do with Michelle!"
"It has to be her... I'll get her..."
"I told you! It has nothing to do with Michelle!"
"You can't Raymond... you can't..."
"I'm sorry," Raymond walked passed her. Rain stood their, crying like hell. Then Raymond turned around, "I hope we can still be friends," and walked away. Rain landed on her knees... and cried.
Frankie appeared behind the building. He looked at Rain crying, then at Raymond, walking away. He can't like Michelle... he thought. His hand formed into a fist... he can't.
~THE CAST~
Raymond Lam Fung... ... Raymond Lam
Frankie Lam Mun Loong... ... Frankie Lam
Rain Li Choi Wa... ... Rain Li
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Happy now RM fans? Raymond picked Michelle!
In the next chapter: What will Frankie do? Stay tuned!
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With a bunch of love,
Scarlett ^.^
[January 21, 2004]
P.S. Hope you guys will have a wonderful Chinese New Year!