Fan Fiction |
by Scarlett
Holding hands, Raymond and Rain walked across the Royal Queen's Pier. Rain couldn't stop smiling. I'm dating with Raymond, she thought, the cuuuutest guy on the whole universe! Raymond looked down as he walked. I'm dating finally dating with Rain, but Michelle...
Michelle and Frankie was holding hands walking across the other side of Royal Queen's Pier, both of them are thinking the same thing: Will me and Frankie/Michelle's relationship last long?
The two lovers met.
Michelle. Hi Frankie," Raymond said.
"What's up?" Frankie replied.
"Oh my God! You and Michelle are..." She released Raymond's hand and went to hold Frankie and Michelle's hand. She lifted them up, "...dating!"
"Uh yeah," Michelle pulled free from Frankie and Rain's grip and went to the edge of the pier.
"What's wrong... Michelle?" Raymond said nervously.
She looked at Raymond, "I want to talk to you, but..." She looked at Frankie and Rain.
"Okay, come on Rain," Frankie seemed to know what Michelle is thinking and pulled Rain's arm and led her to the other side of the pier.
"What's wrong?" Rain asked Frankie.
"They need to talk privately."
Rain stopped, "How do you know?"
He looked at Raymond and Michelle, "I just know. Come on," and he led her down the steps.
"What is it?" Raymond asked Michelle and went to her side.
Michelle sighed. "Do you know why I slapped you yesterday?"
"Uh... no."
"Because I was jealous. I was jealous that you and Rain were... were dating."
"You have Frankie."
"No Raymond!" She turned and looked at him, "Don't you see?"
"See what?"
"Do you want to know why I was jealous?"
"Well... sure."
"Remember in eleventh grade, a murderer tried to kill me, but you saved me?"
"Uh... yeah."
"I like you after that. I mean I loved you."
Raymond stared at her, "What?"
"That's why I was jealous, I slapped you because I was jealous... and selfish. I want you all for muself. I don't want anyone to take you," Raymond looked down. She continued, "I ran. Frankie came and cheered me up. That is how me and Frankie started dating, but I still couldn't get you out of my head, out of my heart. And I still went with Frankie, because I know dating with him can get you out of my mind."
Raymond's hand turned into a fist. His knuckles crackled. Michelle looked at his fist, "Are you mad at me dating with Frankie, even though I don't love him?"
He looked up at her, "You're dating with Frankie even though you don't love him?"
She looked at the away. "Do you know what you are doing?!" He shouted, "How would Frankie feel?"
"He knows."
"What?"
"He know i love you very much, but I still wants to be with him. He know I can get you out of my heart."
"Michelle I..."
"Another reason I'm being with him is..." Michelle interrupted, "that I hate you," she looked at him, "I hate you! I hate you for dating Rain, I hate... I hate you for everything!" Tears began to appear on Michelle's eyes.
Raymond looked down, "Are you done yet?"
Michelle looked at him, "What do you mean?"
"I need to go, Rain's waiting for me."
"Right now you still care about Rain?!"
"Bye," He turned and left.
"Raymond Lam!" Michelle shouted. Raymond didn't answer her, he didn't even look back. "Raymond..." Michelle mumbled and landed on her knees, "Raymond..."
Raymond walked faster. He then broke into a run and ran away from her to Rain, tears trickling down his face.
~THE CAST~
Michelle Yip Suen.......... Michelle Yip
Raymond Lam Fung.......... Raymond Lam
Frankie Lam Mun Loong.......... Frankie Lam
Rain Li Choi Wa.......... Rain Li
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Too bad for Michelle! And Raymond's so rude huh? Please stay tuned for the next chapter.... 'Captured'
[December 17, 2003]