| Fan Fiction |
by Ayu
Title: 4/5
It suited the story which is good though it wasn’t very catchy. Anyways good job with the title
Poster/Background: 8/10
Your poster is so cute and sweet and so is your background. I really like your background, it is really lovely. The font colour was a bit bright but it looked really nice with the background.
Forewords: 7 /10
A very good forewords. You had managed to introduced the characters and gave preview of the chapters. Great work!!!
Plot : 12 /15
Very original, you manage to write it in your style. The story kind of remind me of the taiwanese drama Romantic Princess though, since there is like heirs to companies in your story. Anyways, you planned it out really nice and lovely.
Creativity/Originality: 7 /10
It was original, but like I said it reminds me of the drama somehow, because with the heir thingy. The plot was original and unique overall maybe you could describe more about the events. It will help the reader to understand better. You are pretty good in writing and describing the rated stuff.
Flow: 8/10
I think you did quite a good job . Your writing is very impressive and you describe the characetrs and story really well. Keep up the good work!!!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:9/10
You have great grammar skills. There weren’t many mistakes throughout the all thechapters. Congrats on that!!!
Characterisation:7/10
You described your characters very clearly. It made it very easy to understand. Really good!!!
Writing Style: 8 /10
I like how you write and describe your story. You wrote the story really well!! I hope you will keep up the good job!! Excellent job!!
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoy your fanfic overall. Good job!!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Bonus: 5/5
Excellent work overall, eventhough there were rated parts. Not all writers are good at writing rated fanfics. Just continue what you are doing , you’re doing a great and wonderful job.
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH TO CANDYCANE @ MYSTERYCIOUS FOR THE REVIEW!!!!
Haha don't worry,I'll update today,guys xD be patient =)
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-.- Okay I WON'T update today...my father is being moody again -.- AISH but I'll write a very LOOOOONG chapter to make up for it =) I promise! :D