| Fan Fiction |
by XiaoEr
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Title of the story: In my remaining days
Story URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/XiaoEr_01
Author of the story: Xiao Er
Reviewer: Amaliya from Fairytale-Fantasies (www.fairy-tale-fantasies.blogspot.com)
Title: 4/5
Comments: I think the title match okay with the story.
Appearance: 5/5
Comments: I really like the poster and background and the text color is good. You can read the story without hurting your eyes.
Forewords: 9/10
Comments: I like the forewords. You learn something about the characters and their personalities, which I think is good.
Plot: 13/15
Comments: I like the plot. I think it’s interesting.
Originality: 15/20
Comments: I have seen other stories a bit like this but I like it anyways.
Grammar/Spelling/punctuation/vocabulary: 8/15
Comments: There are some spelling mistakes but you need punctuations since there really isn’t and it sometimes make it a little confusing.
Details: 3/5
Comments: There are not really that many descriptions of the environments but I like the detailed descriptions of the main characters.
Writing style: 5/10
Comments: I would really like if you used punctuation so people could understand a little more. You could for example write it like a script like this; Ella: ----. Chun: -----, and so on or like this “----“ Ella said. It would make it much easier to understand.
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Comments: I enjoyed reading your story but at some times I got a little confused of who was saying what and such but other than that I think it’s really enjoyable.
Bonus: 4/5
Total: 74/100
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-Amaliya webmissie
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Really glad I have this score even though I don't have writing skills my vocabulary is also poor :)
But it's ok :)
Thanks for making the review and the poster also ^_^!
XiaoEr ^_^~♥