| Fan Fiction |
by jwyl
Title: 4/5
* I think the title connected with the story pretty well, yet, it was not really interesting or it wouldn't really attract readers as much.
Poster/Background: 9/10
* I think the poster was really simple yet really pretty and done really well. The background was plain but it didn't bother me.
Forewords: 3/5
* I thought that you should've given a longer forward. Cause it was too short, yet, I still think that it was good since you didn't give off the whole complete story.
Plot: 13/15
* I think that this plot was pretty good. It was alittle new to me. But it didn't catch my attention enough.
Flow: 7/10
* I saw at some parts, you rushed to end it. Like the flight back to Canada. It was alittle rushed, but it had a good flow.
Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 9/10
* I spotted a few spelling error/grammars like you wrote Canada when it was suppose to be Korea. Where Joseph came to Korea. But everything else was perfect.
Characterization: 6/10
* Well, you didn't actually characterize the people in your story. So, some points were taken off. But then, since your story had already explained it in the story, it was ok.
Orginality: 5/10
* This story doesn't seem new. I'm sure I read a story like this before and seen some like this out there so thats why its not really new. But the creativeness of the story was really good.
Writing style: 4/5
* Your style is a little different, but then I still enjoyed it.
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
* To tell you the truth, when it started out, I didn't really like it. But when EunJi got hurt from those girls, my blood boiled. I was soooo mad at WonBin! And the part where EunJi and Wonbin was arguing, I was like mad too, cause WonBin didn't believe her. Lol, ok, I'm getting out of hand, anyway. I think this story was good. I liked the ending as well. Good Job!
Overall score: 68/100