Fan Fiction

Deeply * cOmPLeTeD*

by Aries

Chapter 16

Help!

*After the date*

Sammi's House
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Sammi: Thanks Louis! I had a great time today!

Louis: No prob! Call me whenever u wanna come out!

Sammi: Bye!

Louis: Bye!

*Louis drives off back home*

Sammi: What a nice guy! I think I am getting luckier each moment!

Nic: Where've you been? (super suspicious) Huh?

Sammi: No where! I am a good little girl!

Nic: Who's going to believe you? I'm no little boy, Sammi! I have grown up and I can tell there is a secret here!

Sammi: Ok! I'll tell you later!

Nic: Spare me the details! I just need to know what you are doing with Louis at this time of the day?

Sammi: Fine! I won't tell you! And you won't find out a thing about what I did today!

Nic: Com'on Sis! Tell me!

Sammi: I thought you didn't want to know?

Nic: Please! I'm dying to know! (sarcastically)

Sammi: If you ask people questions, you have to ask nicely!

Nic: I'm soooo sorry! Can't you tell me?

Sammi: Since your such a good boy I'll tell ya! Come close...

Louis's House
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Louis: Home at last!

Aaron: Where have you been? (serious voice)

Louis: What do you mean? I was out... on a date!

Aaron: A date with WHO! Flora has been waiting for you for over 2 hours!

Louis: Really? What for?

Aaron: Are you forgeting? She is your girlfriend!

Louis: Oh, yeah! So?

Aaron: SO? What kind of attitude is this? What? You asking for a break-up?

Louis: She's my girlfriend! Why are you sooo upset? Where is she anyway?

Aaron: Do you even...

Flora: Louis! You're back?

Aaron: I havn't finished my sentence, Flora!

Flora: Oop! Sorry! Please continue!

Louis: Nah! Aaron here doesn't have much to say! Com'on into my room! I'v got something to say to you!

Flora: Ok!

Louis: Aaron this is private! Don't try to listen!

Aaron: I promise to stay here and not go eavesdropping!

Louis: Com'on Flora!

Louis's Room
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Flora: What do you want to tell me?

Louis: I wanna ......b...

Flora: Huh? I didn't really get it?

Louis: I wanna...I can't say it!

Flora: I also have something to tell you! But it might... be a really harsh thing, so...

Louis: I wanna break-up with you! (suddenly)

Flora: Huh? I hope this isn't my hearing problem!

Louis: No it isn't! I'm serious! Dead serious about this, Flora!

Flora: Whatever you say! I was gonna say the same thing!

Louis: You must b kidding!

Flora: No! You see I like Aaron more than I like you so...

Louis: I know! You guys have been doing stuff behind my back! I know! I know! I know everything!

Flora: I'm glad you know! So why don't you like me anymore?

Louis: Because...(blushes) I like Sammi!

Flora: HUH!? Sammi? How could it be Sammi? I thought her boyfriend Andy came back?

Louis: I know! He is my step brother!

Flora: You think you can win Sammi's heart? After she saved it for your brother for a long time?

Louis: I am very confident! I was hoping you could help me?

Flora: OH! So I'm supposed to help you? WEll... I guess I could do that!

Louis: That would be great! But the first thing is to get rid of my brother! We need to kick him out of the picture!

Flora: You can be the person to be with her if you show your care and love! (laughs) hehe!

Louis: What are you laughing at?

Flora: i didn't know you would be so cute when you get mad and nervous!

Louis: Stop joking around! No time for these things! I just had a date with sammi!

Flora: No Way! You sure you need my help?

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