Fan Fiction

The Perfect Star [COMPLETED]

by Cruz

Chapter 34

Swimming pool

*~~~~ went out to see Diane.. When Max saw ~~~~, he smiled to the both and went inside*

You: Hey.. bessie..

*Diane was still quiet.. still crying, but she was now crying ‘cause of guilt[?]*

You: Heyy.. why are you crying?

*Diane hugged her tightly. ~~~~ patted her back*

Diane: I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to ruin your perfect birthday! I--
You: Stop it! You didn’t ruin it! You made a perfect “bestfriend” memory..
Diane: But, why are you SO good to Sandara?! She’s irritating..
You: Mmh.. because… she….. I don’t know either! I just feel that I shouldn’t be angry to her, ‘cause she didn’t do something bad to me.. r-right?
Diane: Oh well.. I should really not lose my temper so quick..
You: Let’s stop talking about this and let’s go inside!

*They went inside.. Everyone was silently sitted at the floor..*

Diane: HEY GUYS! Let’s be happy! So.. Is Everyone done in the message?

*Everyone smiled and forget what happened*

Yunho: its Xiah’s turn!
Max: Go on hyung… Saranghaeyo!

*Xiah bowed his head*

Xiah: ~~~~ wouldn’t be angry if I didn’t ask her permission….
Max: What? I don’t get it.. That’s your inspiring message?

*Xiah crumpled a paper and throwed it to Max*

Xiah: Your ruining my moment..
Yunho: What’s it Xiah?

*Xiah tilted his head up and stared at ~~~~*

Xiah: My Honey will not be angry if I…

*Xiah went nearer to ~~~~ and placed his forehead on her's*

Sandara: Oh my Gosh!!
Diane: Shh…

*Max held Diane’s hand and give a signal to the others to go out.. When they were outside (actually in the back of the cottage.. Where there is a swimming pool), Yunho spoke*

Yunho: Whoo.. A romantic scene is happening.. I believe I need one of those too….
Max: I do have one coming..

*Everyone stared at Max. He was still holding Diane’s hand, he squeezed it for the others to see..*

Hero: Oooh.. Diane, eh?

*Diane took her hand off Max’s and blushed*
*Everyone turn silent. Suddenly the water from the swimming pool splashed, someone fell in it*

Sandara: Help!

*Yes, it was Sandara who fell. She didn’t know how to swim.. How in hell did she fell?*

Yunho: Sandara!

*Yunho took off his shirt and jumped to the water to save Sandara. Yunho laid Sandara in the floor*

Sandara: Max?...*Unconscious*
Yunho: No.. Its me, Yunho..
Sandara: Yunho? No.. It.. It should be Max.. It should be Max who should save me!
Max: Hey, it’s not because when that “your graduation” thing happened, you should act like I’m yours and your mine!
Yunho: Max.. Not now..
Max: You planned to drown your self, am I right?

*She was silent.*

Max: Am I right Sandara?
Sandara:……YES.
Max: *hah* Why are you acting like this?
Sandara: Stop it!

*She stood up and went outside.. Went HOME to be exact*