| Fan Fiction |
by babygiggle
Daesungiie — yea lol Daesung isn’t really smart on these thing lol.
Lena—lol no it me…hehe I posted on there…but got really tired of posting it there. So I quit. But thanks for reading hehe
Randomreader—thanks for reading…and I will update soon…if I’m not too busy.
Sunny♥Hannie—hehe lol…thanks for liking…pervy readers? I didn’t think you were lol…
ML—wow in one day? That a lot of reading. Wow I’m impressed. But really thanks a lot for liking it. He will find her…you’ll see…probably in a few more chapter.
Strawberry donut—TOP and Pandara interaction will come in a few chapters…just wait and see. Thanks for reading.
NAD—lol he will….but Jonghyun won’t do much to her…you’ll see in this chapter. Thanks for reading k.
Alcia—be happy …the nice doctor won’t die lol thank for reading.
LD—I’m sorry for never responding…I usually just want to post it up for you guys. But I’ll try responding once in awhile. Thanks for reading.
sweet_love_23—lol I really do need to make it longer huh? I’ll try. But thanks for reading. I’ll try to update more often if I have time.
BLoOMuSiCaL—doesn’t Daesung kind of annoy you when he doesn’t know right away…like he slow or something? Lol…he does with me. But thank you for reading
(: --yea he is slow… lol thanks for reading…
Lizzyvann—I will try to update more often...thanks for reading.
Liz—that part will come out in the next part…I already started updating that part…lol…wait and see what happen. Thanks for reading.
VIPYongieluvsyue :)—you’ll see what happen…in the next part…but TOP apology comes in later. Hehe thanks for reading.
Pan—I will update as soon as I can.
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JOY—thanks for reading…I will update if I’m not to busy.
Gray'Cee—yea it understandable but wouldn’t it be better if he actually investigated more? Lol…thanks for reading…and you’ll be shocked at want happen in the next chapter between Nari and Daesung.
BubbleTea—aww thanks…hehe and I will try to update…
loven_u—you know my cousin wanted to rip out her hair when he did that? Lol
ix3himxD—yup both group I love that why…lol…yea…she does love him…but it was still wrong that he did that.
Suki♥--aww wifey thanks. Hehe I love you…you always support my story!!
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PHINS—unbelievable huh? Lol thanks for reading.
Dreena—I’ll try…
EunSu—isn’t Seungri a cutie!!!
Oh wow I have so many readers…will I just want to thank you guys so much for reading… did you know I used to have in mind that Jonghyun was going to die in this story? Sunmae wasn’t supposed to be in the story…I decided not to kill him since I love him too much to do that.
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(Pandara P.O.V)
I finish knitting my 3rd full out fit for my baby…I use the color blue since most boy and girls wear that color. I’m almost due can you believe? Just 2 more months, then I won’t be alone anymore…
These past several weeks Jonghyun hasn’t visit me, I wonder why? I’m happy that I’m alone but also sad…since having Jonghyun is actually comfortable…
TOP how are you? Do you miss me? I miss you so much. Our baby is growing within me. God…I miss you so much.
Tears drop from my eyes again. I know it not healthy for my baby but I cannot help myself…
(End of Pandara P.O.V)
(TOP P.O.V)
I mark off the calendar, just 2 more months my lovely Pandara will give birth to our baby. Pandara come back…
At that moment, something I’ve never done ever since my father died, I cried…I miss you so much, I miss your smile when you’re happy with me, I miss your tantrum when you don’t get what you want. I miss your warmed when I hold you at night, but most importantly I miss you because I love you…
(End of TOP P.O.V)
(Pandara P.O.V)
*Knock*
*knock*
*Knock*
I got up wiped my tears and walk to the door, I open it and Jonghyun was at the door.
“Jonghyun?”
“Pandara, I need to talk to you.”
We sat down on the carpet since I couldn’t afford any furniture except for a bed.
“You wanted to talk to me?” I asked.
“It’s more of a deal.”
“Ok…”
“You’re free if you help me.” Jonghyun said.
I was happy freedom…but what did he need?
“Help on what?”
“*Deep sigh* Pandara, I had wonder myself if I really love you…I do. But not the way I thought I did. The longer I spent with you my feeling started to change…how I see you as no more than a sister. I’m willing to apologize for all that I’ve done. And when you are free you’ll still be under my care so that no one can hurt you.”
“Wow Jonghyun, I—I don’t know what to say.”
“Call me oppa, I would be really happy.”
“Oppa…”
“Good.”
“Um oppa…what do you need help on?” I asked.
“Uh…ok, there’s this girl, she’s everything. She made me feel love again. I want you to tell me what I should do. I mean, we’ve been talking and hanging out for almost 3 weeks. Now. And I want to make it official. Can you help me? Tell me what to say.” He begged.
“Hmm...If it were me…I’d ask her out. Tell her how much she means to me, and how the past weeks had been for you since you’ve met her. Tell her the things you told me…she would be overwhelmed and she’ll go on a date with you maybe even kiss you to tell you she feels the same way you feel about her.” I told him.
“That’s it?” he asked.
“Oppa, you’re a handsome man, you’ll do fine.”
“Pandara, I think this is the first time you are really open toward me.” he told me.
“It’s been such a relief today, and I have always thought of you as a brother. So hearing you say this instead of trying to be my lover makes me really happy. So I guess I’m a little excited about being free again too. Thanks oppa.” I told him.
“Well, I’m going to go now, I have a date.” He winked.
I smiled, he left…
Am I really free? Did you hear that baby? We’re free! No more imprisonment. We can live happily now…
(End of Pandara P.O.V)
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Thanks you guys so much…I hope you like this chapter!!!