| Fan Fiction |
by afhilangie
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Title: Candy-Coated Love
Author: afhilangie
Reviewer: Yoonhee
Title: 4/5
It's kind of a typical title. And it kinda tell me about the story, but I liked it because of the sweetness and because I LOVE candy x)
Poster/Background: 8/10
The poster was beautiful, but because of the background I couldn't see some of the words because it blends with the background.
Forewords: 3/5
Sorry to say, but you have some spelling mistakes there. There are also some punctuation mistakes, which I noticed.
Plot: 8/15
A cliched plot. I've seen and read many stories with this typical type of plot and setting. Love, Romance, all that.
Flow: 5/10
I'll be honest. Your story is too draggy, I'm sorry to say that. I'm sure your readers wouldn't like it if your story is dragging all the way.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 6/10
You didn't use the kind of vocabulary that really expresses the feelings of your characters. But still, I can understand and I think because of the simple vocabs you used, your readers can understand more. You can improve! :)
Characterization: 7/10
Though I can understand your characters well, I think you didn't describe really well about some of your characters.
Originality: 6/10
Sorry if I've been saying too much 'cliche' and 'typical' words. But somehow, I think yours
Writing Style: 8/10
Maybe because you're suited and is comfortable with that writing style, I wouldn't say about the mistakes and about the dragginess of the story. By the way, there's not much mistakes, just a little.
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
I hate to admit, but I actually love the clicheness of the story even though I've read much more stories about it. Maybe because I love these childish, cute and bubbly kind of romance, I enjoyed the story ;DD
Bonus: 5/5
For the really cute and bubbly story even though it drags a bit xDDD
Total Score: 67/100