Fan Fiction

Is this really fate??? COMPLETED

by crystal

Chapter 14

It can't be

restaurant eatting hot pot

michelle: dig in everyone

everyone put the food in to cook

rain: ray, can u get my shrimp inside

raymond: ok

tavia: wow rain, u sure got ur bf undercontrol

rain blushed: naww

ron looking happy that tavia was back to her normal self.

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after the dinner

michael: hey mich, i am gonnan catch up with my buds tonite, so u have to go home with the others

michelle: alrite

charmaine: mich, i am going to go back to the hospital tonite

julian: i'll drive u back

charmaine: ok

michelle: can anyone take me home

raymond: i would

rain was a little mad cuz he wanted more time with raymond

michelle: alrite, thanks

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in raymond's car

front seat: ray and rain
back seat: michelle

rain: hey michelle, where do u work at?

michelle: i work at the attourney office, and i am a lawyer

rain: wow, with julian?

michelle: yea, we work together alot

rain: i,m a jewelry designer

michelle: that is so cool

rain: sometimes it is hard to come up with stuff

michelle: u need alot of inspirations

rain: how come ur so quiet honey?

michelle felt a little weird about what rain called raymond.

raymond: my throat is a little dry today, so i don't feel like talking much

raymond pull over

raymond: were here rain

rain: why didn't u take michelle home first?

(wanting to spend time with raymond)

raymond: so i don't have to make so many turns

rain: bye ray

raymond: bye

rain lean in for a kiss

raymond whispering to rain: what are u doing? michelle is here

rain: i don't care

raymond lean over and kissed her

rain: bye ray and bye michelle

rain left

michelle: wow u guys are a loving couple

raymond smiles: yea

michelle: u can stop there

raymond stops the car

raymond: u want me to accompany to ur house

michelle: no thank you

raymond: are u sure? a girl shouldn't be alone at this time

michelle: i will be ok

raymond: alite then

michelle: bye and thanks for the ride home

michelle walk towards her house

boy: michelle

michelle: Samuel, hey

sammuel: where have u been all nite, i waited for a long time

michelle: i went out to dinner with my friends

sammuel: michelle, please give me a chance

michelle: sorry, i just can't

sammuel:michelle, come on

michelle walk towards home, sammuel pulled her back

michelle: please let go of me

sammuel: michelle, i won't

sammuel hold on michelle and tries to kiss her

michelle: stop it

raymond didn't leave yet and heard some noise

sammuel: come on michelle, u know i am right for u

raymond: HEY LET GO OF HER!i am a police

michelle: raymond

sammuel: who are u?

raymond: who are u?

sammuel: i am michelle's bf

michelle: let go of me

raymond: no ur not, she is my gf

michelle looked surprised

sammuel: is that true michelle

raymond: of course it's true

raymond wrapped her arms around michelle

raymond: see

sammuel: i don't believe u, police officers don;t scare me

raymond then kisses michelle on the lips

raymond: yea so now u believe, i order u not to ever bother my gf anymore, u got that

sammuel: u win this time, michelle i'll be waiting for u

raymond: yea leave before i lock u up

michelle: raymond, thanks

raymond: np

michelle: ummm.. i better go now

raymond: michelle, wait

michelle: yea

raymond: i love u

michelle: it is getting late, i better go now

raymond: i know u love me too (screaming to michelle)

michelle: what if i do? u have rain. (yelling back at raymond)

Note: right now it is kind of a angry scene, like rain was expressing his love but michelle it say no cuz he has rain and there is like no way to be together.

raymond reaching over to grab michelle's hand

michelle let go

michelle: bye (walking home real fast, tearinging in her eyes)