Fan Fiction

Is this really fate??? COMPLETED

by crystal

Chapter 16

michelle is back

streets

ron: you and you go down by the parks

ron: and the rest of you come with me

raymond:i can be by myself

ron: ok, lets go

raymond running around yelling out michelle

raymond thinks: michelle, where are u? please do anything stupid.

raymond looked at the beach,and high building(u should know why those places)

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Mich/tav/charm's house (9:00pm)

tavia, charmaine, julian, ron and rain are there

ding dong

tavia opens the door

raymond: is michelle Back yet?

tavia: no

ron: did she pick up rain?

rain: no i called her lots of times

charmaine: she been out like for the whole day

rain: wow it's getting late. ray, take me home now

raymond: take u home? (angry) michelle haven't even come back yet.

rain: what are u doing treating me like this

rain ran out the door.

julian: what are u doing ray?

ron: go chase after her

raymond: there is no sign of michelle

julian: we can handle it, go after rain now

raymond had no choice so he ran after ran

raymond: rain rain

rain running even faster

raymond caught up to her

raymond: rain i am sorry, i am just having a bad day

rain: .....

raymond: i am sorry, will u forgive me (gives rain a hug)

rain hugs him back

rain: remember what u said before

FLASHBACk

at the beach

raymond having his arms around rain

raymond: will u be my gf?

rain: ummm... let me think about it

raymond carries her up and swimg her around

raymond: u will be mines forever

let her back down

raymond: well

rain: yes

they kissed

raymond: i will always protect you and be by ur side

END OF FLASHBACK

rain: lets go home

raymond: ok

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Mich/tav/charm's house

charmaine: u guys should leave now, u guys have work tmr

julian: no it's ok

tavia: go home, i think michelle will be alrite

ron: julian lets go home

julian: alrite bye

charmaine walked them out the door

michelle came back

michelle: hey, why are u here so late

ron/julian: michelle, ur back (very surprised)

tavia: michelle

charmaine: how come u didn't pick u ur cell phone

michelle: it ran out of batteries

tavia and charmaine notice that michelle was holding loads of shopping bags

tavia and charmaine looked at each other

charmaine: you two should leave now

julian: alrite

ron: ok let's go

michelle:; bye

they went in to the house

tavia: what's wrong michelle?

michelle: what are u talking about?

charmaine: when ever u go shopping for this long, u have something bothering u

tavia: yea

michelle: it's......

charmaine: what

michelle: i love raymond.

tavia and charmaine were silenced

michelle: raymond told me he likes me

tavia: but he has rain

michelle: yea and i don't want to be a third person and i don't want him to break up with rain just for me

charmaine: i know how u feel

michelle: hey come on and try on the new clothes i bought

tavia: alrite

so the girl just tried on clothes
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julian/ron/ray's house

julian and ron walked in

raymond: why are u guys home?

ron: it is our house

raymond: how about michelle?

julian: she is back

raymond: where did u go? what happen to her?

ron: i don't know

raymond: what do u mean, u don't know (really mad)

julian: calm down ray. michelle is ok

raymond: where have she been?

julian: that we don't know

raymond: what? u guys were there and you don;t know where she have been

raymond ran out of the door real mad

julian: what is wrong with ray?

ron: i ono

julian: do u think ray likes rain?

ron: but he is with rain

julian: it is getting late, lets talk about it tmr