Fan Fiction |
by crystal
raymond and rain where having lunch togethe
rain: hey raymond, do u think u have can go on a vacation right now?
raymond: well i have to check, but since we don't have a case to follow now then it is ok
rain: if u could, lets go on vacation together
raymond: ok, where?
rain: how about to hawaii
raymond: sounds great
rain: then let's buy the ticket later
Michelle enters the cafe.
michelle: hey guys
rain: hey michelle, u wanna sit with us
michelle: its ok, i don't want to bother u guys
rain: not at all, we are just planning to go on vacation together
michelle: o really (feeling uncomfortable)
michelle sat down next to rain
rain: me and raymond are deciding to go to hawaii
michelle: wow how fun, just only the two of u?
rain: yep, it will be so romatic (imagining it)
michelle: it should be (feeling said)
rain: whats wrong raymond, how come ur so quiet?
michelle looking at raymond and kinda guessed why.
raymond: o since i see u girls having a good converstaion, so i did't want to interupt.
michelle: well actually i interupted u guys, i better go now, i have a date with deric tonite
rain: o ok
michelle walked away
rain: so ray, lets buy the tickets to hawaii
raymond:ok
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In the streets
rain: the prices for the ticket wasn't that bad
raymond: o yea
rain: where do u want to go right now
raymond: lets head down to the pub
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the pub
raymond; can u bring three beers over here
rain: why are u drinking so much
raymond: i just can't wait to go on vacation with u
raymond started to get a little drunk
rain: raymond, are u ok, let me take u home
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rain's house
rain: come in raymond
rain put him down on the couch
rain: u sit here while i get u a wet towel
rain left to get the wet towel
raymond: michelle, michelle, where are u? i really love u
rain came back but didn't here what he said
raymond: u came (thought rain was michelle and hugged her)
raymond: don't go don't go
rain: i won't
raymond grab rain and kissed her. rain was a little startled but she responded with a kiss back
raymond: o i love u so much
rain: i love u too
raymond just notice it was rain and not michelle
raymond: rain
rain: yes, what;s wrong?
raymond: o nothing (still drunk)
raymond: umm i better go home
rain: why don't u stay here, since u can't even go anywhere
raymond: i can call ron
raymond dial ron's number
raymond; ron
ron: raymond? are u drunk?
raymond: pick me up at..... rain's....hou.se
ron: ok
ron came and took raymond home
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ROn/ray/julian's house
ron: dammn ur hella heavy
raymond: haha
Julian: what happen to him?
ron: i don;t know, he called and told me to pick him up at rain's plave
ron took raymond in this room and dropped him on the bed
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Hospital
charmaine: doctor this man was in a car accident, we must take him to the operation room at once.
doctor: ok take him
charmaine: ok
nurse: charmaine, can u come over here and help please
charmaine: on my way
charmaine went in to this room
charmaine recognized this person
charmaine: mr. yip!