Fan Fiction |
by crystal
rain: wow that dress looks so nice
raymond: yea i bet it looks even better if it was on u
rain: really?
raymond: of course, y don't u go in and try it on
rain: ok
rain tried on the dress and came out to show raymond
rain: how do i look
raymond: beautiful, u should buy it
rain: but i don't really have any parties to go to
raymond: u can save it for the christmas ball where all the pple from the police station is going
rain: o yea
raymond: i'll buy u this dress... how much is it by the way?
rain: $250
raymond thinks: damn.... that is almost like my two week salary
rain: u can't get it for me
raymond: of course just wanting to know if i could pay it in cash
raymond paid for the dress
rain: u wanna go to the movies now?
raymond: sure
rain: let's watch the new romantic movie
raymond: how about the comedy one
rain: those aren't that funny.. i never even get the jokes
raymond feeling a lil down
raymond: alrite lets get the tickets
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after the movie
raymond took rain home, then he decided to go to the pub alone
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at the pub
girl: hey raymond
raymond: hey michelle
michelle: why are u here on a friday nite
raymond: o i just got back from the movie with my gf rain
michelle: o
raymoond: i am so tired from the movie
michelle: o i usually watch comedy ones
raymond: mee too, but rain wants to watch romantic ones
michelle: i heard that there is this new one coming out called Uncle Bobby. ( i just made it up)
raymond: i wanted to see that one, but rain hates comedy movies
michelle: tav and charmaine are not really into those too, but they do go with me sometimes
raymond: hey since it comes on next friday, want to come and watch it with me?
michelle: sure
the music starts to get louder
raymond: lets get out and dance
michelle: alrite
they just dance with music
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Outside of the Pub
Michelle: that was fun
raymond: yea
michelle accidently trip over a rock and felt. raymond caught her and there was a moment of silence where they gazed in each other eyes. suddenly they snap out of it
raymond: are u ok?
michelle: i am ok, thanks, i better get going ( walked alway real fast)
michelle thinks: omg what is happening to me my heart is beating real fast? maybe it just nothing
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raymond thinks: what was i doing? how come when i looked her in the eyes made me feel so weird. o whatever
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attourney office
knock knock
michelle: come in
julian: we have this new case...blah blah
michelle thinks: o i can't make it to the movies with ray
michelle:excuse me, let me make a call
she stepped out of the office and called raymond
raymond: hello
Mich: o sorry i can't make it today, just got a new case
raymond: i was about to call u too, i also recieved a new case too.
michelle: ok bye
raymond: Bye
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police station
raymond: hey ron
ron: hey ray whats up
raymond: the winter ball is coming up
ron: so what about it
raymond: who are u gonna bring man
ron: why do u need to care?
raymond: well u haven't have a date for a long long time.
ron: so, i can't find my type
raymond: whatever man
ron: how about u? rain ofcourse
raymond: yea who else?
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i hope i am not boring anyone. please give me comments