Fan Fiction |
by crystal
raymond: hey (just came home)
ron: hey (sitting in the couch watching tv)
raymond:where is julian?
ron: he is working in his room
raymond: what's with the lonely face?
ron: i told her
raymond: told who what?
ron: tavia
raymond: that u liked her
ron: yea
raymond: what she say?
ron: she didn't say anthing
ron: well how was ur day?
raymond: i have a funny feelin when i am alone with rain, it just that is so weird. i don't know how to explain it man.
ron: well at least u guys are not fighting or anything (walking back to his room)
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ray's room
ray thinks: how come i feel so weird around rain? is it because i don't love her.(after thinking for a while, he feel asleep)
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Attourney office
raymond: hi is julian here?
leila: oh he went out to see his client
michelle walked by
michelle: hey leila, can u get mr. johnson's file for me?
raymond: hey michelle
michelle: oh hey, y ur here?
raymond: just drop by to see if julian's wants to go out and eat dinner with me
michelle: wow, it's time to leave already
raymond: hey want to have dinner with me
michelle: alrite
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Restaurant
waiter: how many?
ray: two please
waiter: have a seat ( handed them the menu)
michelle: what today's special
waiter: for u two a lover's mail, very great price
raymond: alrite, i'll take that
raymond:(says to michelle)let's just try it
michelle just smile back
waiter came back
waiter: here we go
ray: thank you
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after the dinner... in the streets
raymond: the food were delicous huh?
michelle: yea
raymond: how have u been?
michelle: i been pretty busy
michelle just remembered: OMG, i forgot to bring the file home with me. i better run back
she ran across the streets so fast without looking and a truck was coming towards her.
raymond: MICHELLE!
raymond ran and grab her out of the way. both of them were safe. raymond arms where around her and there eyes met. suddenly this feeling just came to them. they lean closer and started to kiss.
honk honk and truck pass by
they stopped
michelle: umm.. i'll see u later
raymond: bye
michelle ran quickly away
raymond thinks: when we kiss it felt so comfortable and relax. why am i feeling this way? rain is my gf.
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Mich/charm/tavia's house
tavia: hey mich
michelle just came back
michelle: hey guys
charmaine: why are u home so late?
michelle: went out to dinner
tavia: what's wrong?
michelle: i want to know myself
charmaine: why what is it?
michelle: i think i like raymond
tavia: really?
michelle told them the whole stroy.
charmaine: wow how romantic ( wishing that happened to her and julian)
tavia: well he does have a gf, but u shouldn't give up since they are not even married yet
michelle: i'll talk to u guys later, i have a work to do
michelle walked in her room
michelle thinks: michelle, are u in love with raymond lam??? errr..
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