Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 13

The Contest Begins

ball room where the fashion is helled

raymond was sitting next to rain and michelle was sitting at another table

raymond: hey rain, i can't wait to see ur dress and omg look at ur earings

rain: i hope i win, but what is wrong with my earrings

raymond: doesn't that make u feel weird

rain: no not at all

raymond: ok, but it does go with ur dress

rain: yep and i really hope the pple will like the dress i designed

raymond: ofcourse

rain: if i win, the whole world would know that my clothings are like the best

raymond: yea, but if u don't it doesn't mean ur not

rain: u don't understand ray, i want to win this

raymond: rain, don't worry about it

rain: i can't

raymond: come on just relax and everything will be ok

rain: after i looked at most of the dress i think mines, MY, VY and Navy Co has chance of winning

raymond: well at least u have a chance and my friend has a chance

rain: ur friend?

raymond: yea i want to introduce u to her

rain: ok, i would like to meet her and see her dress

raymond: come rain, forget about winning, come on

raymond lead rain to michelle

michelle: spotted rain

michelle: rain

raymond saw michelle

raymond: michelle

michelle: o hey raymond

rain: raymond i want u to meet my sister

raymond: ok, but let me introduce u to my friend

rain: ok

rain: michelle, this raymond my bf and raymond this is my sister michelle

raymond: michelle is ur sister

rain: yes

michelle: omg ur bf is raymond

rain: what u guys know each other?

raymond: yes

michelle: yea

rain: well may the best designer wins

michelle: ok

rain left

raymond: excuse us michelle

raymond went off to rain

raymond: rain

rain: what?

raymond: what is wrong with u

rain: i just can't believe that my sister knows u

raymond: yea i take the pictures for her

rain: i don't like her designs, i don't want u liking her designs

raymond: y not?

rain: her clothes are top selling than mines

raymond: so

rain: because of her, i might not win this contest

raymond: u two are sisters, and it doesn't matter

rain: doesn't matter, doesn't matter, she is just a lonely girl and me having my dad by my side and she still does a better job than i

raymond: come on rain, sit down and relax

rain: ok

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Host: GOOD evening everyone, welcome to the 2004 National Dress Contest

claps clps

host: ok here we are with this beautiful dress from Navy Co. by shirley yeung

host: next we have this elegant dress by rain li

clap claps

host:blah blah blah

host: our last dress is my michelle yip

crowd: woo hoo (claps)

host: ok, all of u have seen all the dresses, now time for the judges to decided. while the judges are decided it is time to dance
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raymond: lets go out and dance

rain: ok

raymond and rain danced

leila: michelle, look isn't that raymond the photgrapher?

michelle: yes it is

leila: isn't that girl rain li

michelle: yea

leila: wow when did raymond ever know her

michelle: they were together before he came to hk

leila: o

michelle: yea

leila: rain li is a pretty good designer

michelle: yes she is, i always see her i the competitions

leila: isn;t she related to u?

michelle: yes she is my half sister

leila: really

michelle: yes