Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 49

An unforgetable nite

Back in HK

michelle: raymond

raymond: michelle

michelle: u should know my father

raymond: yes. hi mr. yip

mr. yip[: hey raymond

michelle: lets go somewhere and eat

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After the dinner

michelle: dad u want me to take u home?

mr. yip: no i'm staying at an hotel

michelle: y?

mr yip: i have to leave tmr

michelle: o

mr. yip: so this is like good bye

michelle hugged her father and said goodbye

mr. yip: good bye raymond

raymond: bye mr. yip

mr. yip left

raymond: where do u want to go now? now we don't have to be so secretive when we go out

michelle: lets go to my place

raymond: if that is what u want

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Michelle's place

michelle: come on in

raymond: ok

michelle: i love you raymond

raymond: i love u too

michelle: i feel so relax now, no more secret

raymond: yea

michelle tookk out her top and dim the lights

michelle: let me help you

michelle helped raymond unbutton his shirt

michelle then unziped her pants and alot helped raymond

raymond: thanks

michelle and raymond started kissing a necking each other and then u should know what happened.

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Morning

michelle: ur awake

raymond: yea

michelle: i was really happy last nite

raymond: so when do u want to get married?

michelle: who said i want to marry u?

raymond: well, ur not a virgin and more and as a man i have to take responsibility

michelle: lol,...now get up, i have to get to work

raymond: no i won't, i want to continue

michelle: no get up

raymond: come on

michelle: fine just a little more

raymond laid on top of michelle and they start to kiss

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hope that it didn't gross u out. comments plz