Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 5

Ripped Sweater

Ray's house

ding dong ding dong

raymond opens the door

guy: a package for mr lam.

raymond: i am mr. lam

guy: a package for u

raymond: thank you

raymond close the door

ron: who was that?

raymond: a deliever man

ron: whos that from

raymond: its from rain

he opened it

raymond: wow a jacket

ron: i thought she doesn't design mens jacket but she did it just for u

raymond: that is what u get for having a great girlfriend.

ron: sure

raymond tries on the sweater

raymond: it fits perfectly too

ron: come on we have to go down to michelle's studio today

raymond: ok lets go

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Michelle's studio

michelle: hey guys

raymond: hey

ron: hey, where's tavia?

michelle: she is in the dressing room

ron: ok

raymond:well set everything up

tavia came out

ron: tavia

tavia: hey ron

ron: wow u look awesome today

tavia: thanks

raymond: lets start shooting

after shooting the pics

raymond: ok were done

raymond takes off his sweater and puts it down on a chair

michelle: ok thanks you u guys

ron: np

tavia: drinks you guys

tavia handed them drinks

ron: thank you

raymond: thanks

he put on his sweater and part under the shoulder ripped

raymond: oh shit

ron: whats up

raymond: my sweater ripped

tavia: its just a sweater

ron: that is from his girlfriend

tavia: o

raymond: omg, my sweater

michelle: i think i can fix it let me see.

raymond took the sweater off and gave it to michelle

michelle: o heres the problem mens shoulders where there muslces are the sweater should of been wider, this is just too small.

ron: what it can't be, his gf is a clothes designer too

michelle: well usually when i design the mens clothing i make sure that part is wide enough.

raymond: can u fix it?

michelle: yea, i can even help u expand it

raymond: ok thanks you

michelle: i;ll it back to u later

raymond: ok thanks

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Ray's house

ding dong ding dong

ron opens the door

ron: hey michelle

michelle: hey is raymond home?

ron: yes he is. Raymond!

raymond came out

raymond: hey michelle

michelle: here is ur sweater

raymond: thank you

he tries it on

raymond: wow it more loose now

ron: yea

raymond: thank you, u want me to pay u back

michelle: no its ok, these are easy stuff

raymond: no how much?

michelle: no its ok

raymond: well i'll invite u to dinner

michelle: ok

raymond: lets go

michelle: i can't tonite maybe next time

raymond: ok

michelle: i'm gonna go now, bye

raymond: bye

michelle left

ron: wow she sure fixed it

raymond: yup

ron: she is a very good designer

raymond: that is why u love her clothes.