Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 58

On the Boat

The Boat

rain: the view is so pretty

raymond: yes it is

rain: hey lets sit down and eat

raymond: wow u told them to prepare dinner for us

rain: yea

raymond: ok lets eat

rain: how have u been?

raymond: great

rain: how come ur not spending time with my sister?

raymond: she is busy

rain: o

raymond: the food is delious

rain: yea, try their wine

raymond: ok thanks

rain: hey u wanna dance?

raymond: dance?

rain: yea

raymond: ok

raymond stand up and bow down

raymond: may i

rain took his hand and they started to dance

rain put her head on raymond's shoulders

raymond: ummm...

rain: yes raymond

raymond: o nothing

rain: i just love dancing in the boat at nite

raymond: o

rain: there is this romantic feeling

raymond: umm... yea

rain: o raymond, (she started to take of her top slowly)

raymond: what are u doing?

rain: o raymond,u know i always loved u

raymond: please stop

rain threw her bra at raymond head

raymond: stop, please

rain: open ur eyes and make love with me

raymond: i am sorry rain, i don't love u

rain: hey, a girl is standing right here is offering herself to u and u don't accept

raymond: i only love michelle

rain: open ur eyes raymond lam and start ur thing

raymond: no i won't, i only open to michelle

rain: fine (she went to raymond and trying to take off his pants)

raymond: hey stop it (finally he opened his eyes)

rain: finally u open ur eyes

raymond: would u please put on ur clothes

rain went to raymond and started to hug him

rain: i raymond please don't move

raymond was feeling weird and couldn't really doing anything cuz a naked girl was hugging him

rain: raymond, relax and just do what u want to me (rain starts to kiss raymond)

raymond: stop rain (rain just continued)

raymond finally got the guts to push her

rain: raymond, whats wrong

raymond: please, stop, i only love michelle

rain: well can michelle satisfy u as i do huh??? does she? aren;'t u suppose to be with her right now in bed making love??? NO!!! and i am here... so what more do u want? I have what she have, i can give it to u. She is those girls that like to work and work and just have no time for u but me everynite if u need. think about what u want everynite. michelle isn't right for u. i am.

rain got up and started to walk to raymond and kissing him all over the place.

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