Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 70

Raymond and Rain

on the phone

michelle: hey raymond

raymond: hey

michelle: where are u right now?

raymond: meeting ron at the bar

michelle: o, isn't ron and tavia taking tammy to the doctor of a check up

raymond: almost forgot, but i think imma go to the bar to have a drink'

michelle: ok, don't drink too much

raymond: ok

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bar

rain was following raymond all this time

raymond: can i get a beer

rain went to the bar tender

rain: i would that drink to that man

bar tender: ok

rain dropped some powder in there

rain: excuse me (to a waiter)

rain: can u give this drink to the guy (pointing at raymond)

the waiter took the drink to raymond

raymond: thanks

raymond drank his beer

raymond thinks: i feel so dizzy. my head hurts

rain came over to raymond

rain: sir sir, are u ok?

raymond: who are u? eveyrthing is so blurry. ahh.. my head hurts

rain: let me help u

rain and raymond walked out of the bar and went to an hotel

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rain dropped raymond on the bed and took off his clothes. then she took off her and started to kiss raymond. raymond responded a couple of times but then he feel asleep.

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morning

rain and raymond were naked on the bed under the blankets

rain was awake

all of sudden raymond wakes up

raymond: where am i? (and noticed that he was naked)

rain: o raymond

raymond: rain?

rain: raymond

raymond: why am i here?

rain: u were with me the whole night

raymond: what?

rain: i saw u at the bar

raymond: but why would i be here with u?

rain: well i saw u all drunk and u asked me if i wanted to spend time with u and i did and so were her

raymond: what?

rain: hey u can't be irresponsible and leave me..

raymond: what? i am sorry rain of what happen last night

raymond hurried and put on his clothes

rain: but...

raymond: i have to go.. i am very sorry

raymond ran out of the room

rain smile: just wait until ur wedding and u will be mines