Fan Fiction |
by CrysTaL
Raymond's place
ron: are all of u guys ready to go?
guys: yes
ron: where's raymond
raymond: ok, i'm ready, wait, have u seen my mirror
ron: o right here
raymond: thanks
raymond used the mirror and after using it he thought he put the mirror on the table but he didn't
bang....
ron: what was that?
raymond: o shoot the mirror
guy: the elders say that if u break a mirror there will be soemthing bad to u
ron: hey we don't believe these things
raymond: yea
ron: then lets go
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Michelle's place
tavia was finishing michelle's make up
tavia: there, all done
michelle: thanks
tavia: we better go, wear ur shoes now
michelle: ok
tavia: let me go change tammy's diapers first
michelle put on her heels and all of a sudden on of her heels came off from the shoe
michelle: OMG
tavia: what? what is it?
michelle: my heels fell off
tavia: do u have another white pairs of heels
michelle: no, i donated a few pair of shoes this week
tavia: don't worry, lets go to the park first, then i'll go to the stores and buy u a pair
michelle: thanks
tavia: then lets go
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the Park
ron: tavia!
tavia: umm ron, imma go buy shoes for michelle so watch tammy
ron: now? didn't u already buy them
tavia: yea it came off, so i am trying to be back ASAP
ron: here, i'll buy it
tavia: i don't u know which ones, so i am going to go now
ron: ok
tavia: bye
tavia left
raymond: where is tavia going?
ron: she needed to buy something
raymond: o
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ShoE sTore
tavia picked the shoe she wanted to go
tavia: hi, excuse me can i get a 6 1/2 for this shoe please
lady: sure
tavia: quickly please
lady: ok
the lady came back with shoe
lady: here we go
tavia: ok, how much
lady $24
tavia handed her the money and left
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Changing rooms
tavia: ok, i'm back
michelle: thanks
michelle put them on
a lady came in
lady: umm.. the wedding ceremony is about to start
michelle: ok
tavia: are u nervous?
michelle: alittle,...did u see my dad outside?
tavia: yea, but i didn't rain
michelle: o she is probally running late
knock knock
tavia: come in
michelle: dad
mr. yip: michelle, i want to give u this necklance, that was left over from ur mom
michelle: thanks you
tavia: here let me help her put it on
tavia putted on for michelle
tavia: i see how everything is outside
and left
mr. yip: michelle, i want to let u now i love u and wish u a happy future with raymond
michelle: thanks dad (and gives him a hug)
tavia came in
tavia: the wedding is about to start
mr. yip: ok, i am going to go back outside
michelle: ok
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The park
everyone took their positions or seats. As michelle walk down the aile.
when michelle stop in front of the priets, raymond link arms with michelle
priest: we gather all today to witness the marriage of raymond lam and michelle yip. But before we start does anyone object of this marriage. please come forward or forever hold peave
rain walk in
rain: i object!!!
everyone looked back
raymond was getting nervous
priest: ok, everyone silent, and u miss, why to u object them to be together
rain: cuz i am pregant, and the father of my child is raymond lam
crowd was surprised and started to have side conversations
michelle: what did u say rain?
rain: i said...
raymond: lets talk this inside
mr. yip: what is going on here?
mrs. lam walked towards
mrs. lam: what is going on?
priest: why don't u guys go into a room and talk about this
tavia: yea
michelle unlink her arm from raymond
ron: Sorry, we will coninue the wedding soon after we figure out this problem of hours. sorry. play the music (ron told the crowd)
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Comments
i think i might have one of those voting things again. maybe