Fan Fiction

+Finding the right One+ [COMPLETED]

by CrysTaL

Chapter 75

The Father Returns

Raymond's house

raymond came home with rain

rain: wow ur house is so nice

raymond: thanks

rain: its my first time here

raymond: yea

rain: whats wrong raymond?

raymond: rain,.....

rain: yes

raymond: i...just can't believe this happen

rain: what happen?

raymond: that i got u pregnant

rain: its ok

raymond: i am glad that u forgive me but u know i only love michelle

rain: o raymond.. ur silly.....michelle wouldn't accept anymore cuz u slept with me and plus i am carrying ur baby. so its like u must take me and no way michelle wants u

raymond: well thats true

rain: so now u should try to forget about michelle and only think me and the baby ofcourse

raymond: yea.. ur right

rain: right now my tummy is still the same, but watch it grow

raymond: lol

rain: see, u finally smiled.

raymond: yea

rain: the doctor said that if i get mad or disappointed it will also affect the baby so don't make me mad

raymond: i won't

rain: thats good

rain: o raymond, i was scared that i would be alone carrying this baby

raymond: but now ur not, u have me

rain: yes

raymond: where are u staying? let me take u home

rain: right here is my home

raymond; right here?

rain: yea, i need someone to take care of me u know

raymond: but...

rain: michelle lives right across right?

raymond:...

rain: now u love me now, not here, nothing to be worried about

raymond: yea

rain: good

raymond: let me set up the room for u

rain: its ok, i'll sleep next to u

raymond: u might not be comfortable

rain: its ok

raymond: but not the baby

rain: o yea

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the next morning

rain: hey honey

raymond: hey, i have to go to work right now, so i might be home like real late tonite

rain: ok

raymond: ok bye

they kissed and raymond left

rain thinks: maybe go out and shop for awhile

rain when out the door and lockiing and just then michelle was also outside

rain: hey michelle

michelle: hey

rain: i am really sorry about u and raymond,it just that i have his child and we had a great time that nite. men needs these great time and woman the can produce for him

michelle: exuse me, i have to go

rain smiled and went shopping

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IN the streets

A guy( the second guy that she slept with) following rain

guy: hey..

rain: sorry, i don't know u

guy: u don't remember me? we slept to gether

rain: shh.. would u quiet down

guy: o, so u do remember me

rain: ok , i do

guy: so still offering?

rain: no

guy: no? how come?

rain: i got what i wanted

guy: so ur pregnant

rain: yes

guy: well i never really every slept with a pregnant woman before

rain: no

guy: come on, anyways is it mines?

rain: why do u need to know!!

guy: well is it?

rain: yes

guy: whoa, lets do it again

rain: no

guy: i will tell ur bf that the child is not his

rain: no, don't tell him

guy: then u know what i want

rain: fine

guy: ok lets go
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Hotel

rain: hey, don't make me drop this baby

guy: ok, i will go easy and slow this time

guy: don't just stand their get on the bed

rain laid down on the bed

the guy took of his clothes and slowly take of rains clothes and slide his hands throught rain's head to toe

rain thinks: the guy is so perverted. touching me everywhere. i hate this, when we he stop

rain: thats enough already, stop

guy:but i didn't get enough

the guy took off all of rains clothes and kisses her

rain: i have to be home by 7pm

guy: yea yea

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rain: its 7 already, stop

guy: this whole time i been doing all the work, maybe u should do something and then i'll let u leave

rain: ok

the guy kisses her on the lips and rain responded.
2 hours later

rain: thats it (panting and sweating)

guy: when u go, u do great

rain: ok, i have to go (panting)

guy: ok, tmr here

rain: what do u mean tmr?

guy: do u want me to tell ur bf

rain: no, please don't

guy: then here tmr

rain: but i have a baby right now, not so easily to get around

guy: fine, at least once a week, i'll fine u

rain: ok