Fan Fiction |
by crystal
ron: so where do u guys want to have dinner?
julian: me and charmaine are going to go eat together
leila: leaving us?
charmaine: sorry leila
leila: just joking with ya
ron: so whose going? tavia?
tavia (talking on the phone): hold on!
ron: can u stop talking to bosco for once
leila: calm down, shes in love
(michelle trying to reach sammuel)
ron: michelle, u coming?
michelle: i don't know yet
ron: ok can we decided whos going with us?
(raymond came out)
raymond: hey guys
ron: hey
tavia (finish talking on the phone): ok count me out on this one.
ron: raymond u wanna have dinner tonite?
raymond: sure
ron: michelle, u coming?
raymond: hey she is going too
michelle: don't worry dr. lam, i am not going.. hmmm
raymond: no need to worry, i don't mind if u come
leila: raymond ur going right?
raymond: yea
leila: i'll come with u guys
ron: terrific.
julian: since u guys have it all settled me and charmaine are going to leave
michelle: hey julian, do u mind dropping me off at my house
julian: no problem
tavia: ah gor. can u drop me off at the shopping center?
ron: buying clothes again?
tavia: so.. (sticks her tounge out)
ron: ok, bye u guys
julian/charmaine: bye
bosco/michelle: bye u guys
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+Restaurant+
waiter: how many people?
ron: umm three
the waiter took them to their seats
leila: so raymond? how long have u been working in the hospital
raymond: well this is like my second year
leila: wow
(ron is feeling left out)
ron: hey leila, what..
leila: why did u want to become a doctor
raymond: cuz i want to help me people and make them feel safe and happy
leila: u are a very nice and sweet guy
ron thinks: i wish she said that to me
raymond: lol thanks
(the waiter came over)
waiter: what would u three want to eat?
leila: i want a chow mein and what do u want raymond?
raymond: ice tea and a steak
leila: an ice tea and a steak
ron: i want a fried rice
leila: don't tell me, tell the waiter
ron blushed: a fried rice please
waiter: that would be all
leila: yes
(when the waiter came back with their food, leila just talk to raymond and ron was feeling left out)
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+Michelle's room+
ring ring ring
michelle: sammuel
sammuel: hey michelle
michelle: can u go out for dinner?
sammuel: i can't, i'm very sorry
michelle: you can't?!!
sammuel: michelle, i have someone that just came from paris and i have to welcome him her to hk
michelle: all u care is ur job, u never care about how i feel
michelle hung up
ring ring ring ring
michelle didn't bother to pick it up.
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+Outside of The Restaurant+
leila: what did u think about the food raymond?
raymond: its very good
ron: hey, its getting late, lets go home
leila: how about we go to the bar?
ron: it is late, and tmr we have work
leila: but it will be fun
raymond: ron is right, its late and we have work tmr
leila: ok
ron: i'll take u home..
leila: its ok i think raymond can.... can u raymond?
raymond: sure
leila: thank you, bye ron
ron: bye
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+Street+
Michelle walking around feeling hurt. She sees many couples walking around which make her more sad.
michelle thinks: its getting late, maybe i should head home
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+In Front of the house+
michelle was walking home and saw leila coming out from a car with a man
leila: thanks for the ride home raymond
raymond: no problem, u want me to walk u in
leila: ok thanks
(michelle saw it was raymond and walk faster to them)
leila: michelle
michelle: what are u doing with this guy?
leila: he took me home
michelle: excuse me raymond, please don't bother my sister ok
raymond: excuse you, i think u got the wrong idea
leila: no, he was going to walk me back home
michelle: why were u with him anyways?
leila: i went with him to eat dinner
michelle: i thought u went with tavia
leila: no, i didn't
michelle: i'll talk to u later about this
michelle: well thank you and no need to walk my sister up home
leila: sorry raymond
raymond: its ok i feel sorry that u have this kind of sister
michelle: me and my sister is us. u care about ur self... come leila, lets get in
leila: but michelle....bye raymond
raymond: see u tmr leila
michelle: lets get in leila
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+michelle/leila's house+
leila: michelle, why do u hate raymond so much?
michelle: he's rude and thinks he knows everything
leila: he just broke ur watch and it was all an accident
michelle: i was going to apologize to him but he ignored me
leila: well he is not like that
michelle: how do u know for sure
leila: because i just know
michelle: don't tell me u like him?
leila: well i do.. so
michelle: u know he has a girlfriend
leila: so, there not married, as long as their not married yet there is also a chance
michelle: listen leila, he is not a right man for u
leila: how would u know
michelle: i know
leila: u assumes things all the time!!!
(leila ran into her room)
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