Fan Fiction |
by crystal
tavia: yea, me and ron can watch raymond
charmaine: oh alrite
julian: ok, lets go
charmaine: bye guys
michelle: bye
ron: bye
[julian and charmaine left]
tavia: so are u two staying?
leila; yea, we'll stay
ron: u michelle?
michelle: i'll stay
[raymond started to wake up]
leila: raymond
raymond: hey
ron: are u ok man?
raymond: yea, just a little headache
tavia: here have a cup of warm water
raymond: thanks. where's rain?
tavia: rain? u guys broke up
raymond: but i felt her lips '
ron: what?
raymond: i remember i was lying down and i kissed her
leila: u most be thinking things
raymond: no, it was so real and sweet. that feeling was real
michelle: u most be thinking of things
tavia: yea
raymond: i was?
ron; come on hungry
raymond: no, i don't have any feeling o eat
leila: u have to eat
raymond: i want to see rain
tavia: raymond, stop thinking about that b****. she is not worth ur heart
raymond: i love her
leila: get it off ur mind
raymond: i want to take a walk outside
ron: raymond
[he left]
ron: u two shouldn't tell him that way, now he ran off
tavia; well why don't u tell him?
ron: i dont' know what to say
michelle: here i'll go
leila: u go michelle?
michelle: yea
tavia: yea just go, maybe he started yelling at u and then he will forget it
ron: becareful michelle
michelle: ok
[she left]
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+at the dock+
michelle: raymond
raymond: what do u want now?
michelle: would u stop acting like this? ur making eveyone suffer beacuse of u
raymond: i don't want them to suffer
michelle: that u don;t suffer. sometimes rain wasn't meant for u. u can't force her to love u if she had her heart on someone else. think about it.
raymond: i just can't believe she didn;t tell me
michelle: maybe she haven't found out. u are a man, take this as for reals not a dream
raymond: i just can't believe she did this for me
michelle: u are being stupid here, since she found someone she likes why don't u find some else. here heart is not on u so accept this. u have to move on with ur life. talking so much to u, its making me tired. if u want to be stupid. then be it, i'm not going to talk anymore
[michelle left]
raymond thinks: it is true. its time for me to move on
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