Fan Fiction

-->Your Choice<-- COMPLETED

by crystal

Chapter 40

=>Arrival to the Hotel<=

[Hotel Lobby]

tavia: pretty nice hotel

leila: yea very high class

julian: ok, they said the host should be heading over

charmaine: ok this is the couple fear factor, so ray, mich?

raymond: what?

bosco: u guys have to pretend that u guys are a couple

michelle: yea we know

ron: hey look, someone is coming

guy: hi everyone, i am Joe Rogan the host for fear factor

all: hi

guy: lets introduce ourselves, first the names and how long have u been dating for married

girl: hi my name is joyce tang and this is my boyfriend marco ngai

marco: hi everyone, we have been dating for 2 years and planing to get married this winter

Joe: sounds great, next

charmaine: my name is charmaine sheh

julian: my name is julian

charmaine: we dated not long ago, 4 months

joe: our younger couples!!!

ron: hi, my name is ron, this is my girl leila.

leila: hi, we dated for 1 month

joe: just dated eh? wish u luck on our first stunt.

ron/leila: thank you

tavia: ok, our turn. my name is tavia and this is my lovely boyfriend bosco

bosco: hey, we dated for almost a year, 11 months

joe: wish u good luck

bosco/tavia: thanks

joe: ok, our last couples

[michelle and raymond waiting for one another to start]

joe: well whos going to introduce themselves first

raymond: i will, my name is raymond and

michelle: i'm michelle

[another silence]

joe: how long have u guys dated?

raymond: o we just dated for...

joe: u guys don't know how long u guys have been dated

charmaine: oh no they just started dating 2 days ago. they just don't want to look awkward

raymond: yea

joe: oh there is nothing to be ashamed off. some couples just met the day before they join fear factor

charmaine: oh

joe: ok, let me give u ur keys to ur rooms. it is a room for a couple, and if u would want separate rooms that will be fine, but u have to pay a $500 fee

leila: ok, lets get our keys

[joe past out all the keys]

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leila: look hunnie, u can see the beatiful ocean out here

ron: yea

leila: this room is better than the one we were staying

ron: yea, lets unpack

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michelle: why are u just standing there, go request for another room

raymond: why don't u?

michelle: i'm not going to pay $500.

raymond: well i'm not

michelle: ur the man

charmaine: come on guys,can't u guys share

michelle: hows this julian, why not u share room with raymond while i share with charmaine

charmaine: no, i want to spend some times with julian

julian: yea

michelle: u guys!

julian: just stay in the same room

raymond: fine, just for u and my sis

charmaine: michelle, come on

tavia: hey guys, u still haven't go to ur rooms yet

charmaine: please michelle

michelle: at least there are two beds

tavia: no, only one

michelle: what?

bosco: yea, king size too, don't have to worry that it is small

julian: that is not the problem

bosco: o i see

charmaine: come on michelle

michelle: fine

charmaine: ur fine right raymond?

raymond: fine

tavia: ok, since everything is settle, go to ur rooms and check them out

charmaine: come on lets go julian

julian: right behind u hunnie

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+raymond and michelle+

raymond: pretty big room

michelle: ofcourse

knock knock

[raymond opens the door]

ron: hey guys

leila: were heading down the pool, wanna come

michelle: sure

leila: charmaine/julian are changing,so u better start changing

raymond: how about tavia and bosco

ron: them two are already down there

michelle: o alite

raymond: we'll be there

leila: ok, see ya

[leila and ron left]

michelle: ok, i am going to change into my swim suit so look away

raymond: why scared that i am going to peak

michelle: shut up, i'm going to use the bathroom

raymond: go ahead, i just change out here

michelle: yea whatever

[michelle enters the bathroom]

michelle thinks: i hope the swimsuit doesn't make me look fat

michelle: hey, i'm done changing,are u done yet?

raymond: i was done so long time ago

[michelle comes out]

michelle thinks: wow, he is really muscular with out his shirt on

raymond thinks: her body is so hot, i wish we were really together

michelle: hey lets go now

raymond: yea

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i'll try to update another chap this week.

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