Fan Fiction

-->Your Choice<-- COMPLETED

by crystal

Chapter 45

=>Feelings Discovered<=

Hotel

raymond: hey do u mind bringing my clothes to the laundry room?

michelle: why can't u?

raymond: since u are going, why can't u do it for me?

michelle: fine

raymond: thanks

[michelle left]

raymond thinks: wow, she is actually going to. too bad that we aren't real couple

michelle thinks: such a lazy butt, but he said thanks

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Laundry room

michelle: oh hey joyce

joyce: hey, doing raymond's laundry?

michelle: o yea since i am on my way doing it

joyce: u two cares for each other more then u seem

michelle: me care for him? haha, yea right

joyce: why would u do his laundry then? well the only guy i did my laundry for is marco. well i got to go. think about it

[joyce left]

michelle thinks: why am i doing his laundry? only a wife would do that. i am not his wife or his girlfriend. ok michelle stop thinking and start doing the laundry.

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Back to the hotel room

michelle: heres ur clothes

raymond: thanks and u even folded them

michelle: yea, it gave me a load more of work

raymond: well i didn't ask u to fold them

michelle: whatever, imma take a shower

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bathroom

[michelle took off her clothing and went into the bath tub and open the water. she splash the water in her hair]

michelle:AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

raymond: michelle!

michelle: AHHHHHHHHH!!!! help me!!!!

raymond: whats wrong?

[raymond was so worried and he rushed into the bathroom and opened the curtains]

michelle: ahhh!! what are u doing?

[michelle pull the curtains to over her body]

[raymond covers his eyes]

raymond: i thought u needed help

michelle: well i did. AHHHHHH!!!

raymond: what is it?

michelle: a cockroach

raymond: where? where?

michelle: open ur eyes

[raymond open his eyes and he grab the cockroach and threw it in the toilet and flushed it away]

raymond: ok done

michelle: thanks

raymond: no problem

[raymond still staring at michelle]

michelle: ummm

raymond: oh sorry, i'll be outside

michelle: yea

[raymond left]

raymond thinks: she got a nice body, i wish there was another cockroach.

michelle: finally the coakroach is gone, good thing raymond was here. having him around make me feel so safe

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