| Fan Fiction |
by D14
Title: 3/5
- I found your title interesting and it did suit the fanfiction but it wasn’t catchy.
Background/Poster: 8/10
- I liked your poster as I thought it did actually suit the mood.
Forewords: 7/10
- I thought you were forewords was plain and simple but a little more information would do.
Plot: 14/15
- I REALLY loved your plot. It was excellent! It was really funny in the end where I [Reader] woke up and found out it was all one dream but when I went to the living room and found out my parents were talking to a mid-age couple, I seriously bursted into laughter. Overall, I absolutely loved it.
Creativity/Originality: 13/15
- It was creative for sure! I never ever came through a fanfiction with an ending like that before! Seriously, I thought it was very exciting to read.
Speed/Flow: 9/10
- The speed flow overall was good but I thought the part where Yunho asked I [Reader] to get married was a tiny bit fast. Other then that, It was perfect!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
- I gave full marks because I didn’t find any mistakes that were actually major ones.
Characterisation: 10/10
- I loved your characterisation! It was explained really well.
Writing Style: 10/10
- Full marks because I loved it and I have nothing else to say other then that.
Overall enjoyment: 4/5
- I am not a major fan [Not yet though] of DBSK, just a minor one but this fanfiction is one that I really enjoyed.
Sub Total: 88/100
Bonus: 2/5
- Because you requested from Lonesome Sprint ;D
- Because it was a fanfiction that I really did enjoy reading.
Total: 90/100
Great job and good luck on your future fanfictions/one shots!
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thanks alot for Lonesomesprint.blogspot.com for granting my request
and dramafreak4eva for reviewing my story.. ^^