Fan Fiction

Dream intertwined with reality [COMPLETED]

by Sunshine Drizzle

Chapter 7

Yunni's Review @ Shredded Hearts

https://buzzword.acrobat.com/#d=T3X9*bEzd0q9aOtiBJXFYg

Uhm I don't really know how to post it here so I'm just giving the link - Anyway, thanks for the honest review, Yunni and the Shredded Hearts family. I know there was a lot of gramar and typos on the story but I chose not to change it - What's the essence of asking for a review if you try to make your work perfect, right? :) Anyway, I'm totally okay with the result :) I'm thankful to Yunni cause now I know how to improve my writing. This is my first ever oneshot so.. forgive me if it's not that good :)

Anyway, I'll try my best to post the review here :)