Fan Fiction

Entwined Eternally .:Completed:.

by aPpLiCioUz

Chapter 60

Bets Rule!

~Hey Guyz! Oh thank you so much for all your comments! They mean so much...and here I go, trying to make a comment back, cuz after all, this is the last chapter to be! Hope you guys enjoyed this story and please leave me and overall comment!
Skye-You're leaving?! Half way around the world?! NO!!! You can't! But then again, why in the world would you not go to vietnam just for me? But then again, I woke up this morning at 12, (about) and rushed to have some breakfast (bagel and cream cheese!-which I love!) then i went online...and found out that you're leaving @ 4?!!! now i'm rushing to complete this chapter for you! i hope that i'll make it in time!...oh Skye! see how special you are to me? lol...well, remember to have fun in Vietnam! and i'll miss you a lot...(mainly your updates) lol. jk, i'll really miss you! love you lots hun!
Raspberry-my swtest reader! how can i thank you enough for all your comments? You're such a supportive reader...to everyone...wow, i'm your doctor? i have thought of pursuing a career in med...but i've never thought that i could treat someone with stories...lol...you're soo funnie...but this story is coming to an end...yup, hope you don't mind...what am i saying? it's your life here! well, skye is gonna go back to vietnam...so that lessen up your doctors...hmmm...should i start another story just for you?
Jenni-Wow, that sure is such a lovely comment! it was so sweet! i did thought that you were a quiet reader, but after that comment, hmmm, i'm not so sure...is that what you're trying to get me to think? lol. you rule too hun! and thanks so much for reading and giving me soo much support!
Jenny- You were one of my really supportive fan...i love you soo much! Thanks for reading and leaving me comments....luv ya babe! (hey! i just realized i had two jenny'z...lol)
Pyre- Hehe, that comment was so long...lol. Louis + Jessica = Forever? How does that sound? I'm so glad you started to read...it's great having another fan!
Guard_Babe- Your name ish so cool...it's sounds like a though gurl, but also a hottie...lol...am i right?
Annie- You Annie-Benny freak! lol...so am I..it's okay right...cuz we're CRAZY about them, huh? YEAH! ANNIE, BENNY, ANNIE, BENNY, ANNIE, BENNY!!!
Kim- Aww...crying? oh i wish i could see you! lol...so i could lend you my shoulder...that is a quarter a min. lol...thanks for your LJ support...it was very much needed. yeah rite! So many LJ fans, I'm smiliing every time i see those two letters!
Raven- Honey, your're back...but where are your updates? Reborn of the Muse? HoGF II? Oh where are they? I'm missing them like crazy! What happened to my star wirter? Well, happy Birthday!!! hope ALL your wishes come true! Wow...18...that's so cool! all grown up now...not exactly (not til 21) but one step closer!
Xgurl- Hope Yen-Chan will be able to help you! She's a great poster maker! And are you starting a story? give me the URL, kae? cuz i'd love to check it out!
Annie4eva- This is the last chapter! Enjoy!
TeeLa- Again, Yen-Chan is the greatest! Hope she'll be able to help you...*hint hint* She's a LJ and BA fan...lol...she'll really enjoy making a poster on them, right Yen?
Goddessofhonour- You're reading! SO happie! you're also a great supporting fan. Thanks SOOO MUCHO!
Vicky-I love new FANS! Thanks for your support...Love you Lots.
Akazukin- I'm glad you're still reading. It made me feel so happy to see your comment!
Twinkle- You're so Sweet! Thanks very much for readin! Please leave me an overal comment on the story!
StwaBewyAngel - Hm, a quiet reader? lol. Well, glad you spoke up and left me a comment! What's your story? I'd like to check it out sometimes, but you have to update often!
Mali-Hey hun! You know what? I changed my SN! It's now...'appliciouz' not hard to remember? lol.
Kiwi- Hey hun! Again, you're a great supportive reader! THANKS A LOT! LUV YA!
YEN-CHAN- I hope you don't mind me giving xgurl your email...she wants a poster and i couldn't think of anyone better...you're a talented pster maker so everyone should ask you for their poster...(do i sound like kissing up?) lol...but it's the truth! Thanks for your work on my stories! Love you sooo much!

Once Again, thanks so much for reading and supporting! You're probably all bored...i should get started on the chapter before Skye kills me...lol...Really, THIS IS FOR YOU AGAIN, SKYE...and YEN-CHAN...and RASPBERRY...(Skye, hope you don't mind sharing? i just want to dedicate it to Yen, my postermaker, and Raspberry, cuz after all, we're her 'doctors' and she's soo supportive of me...) Raspberry, hopefully, this will help your 'disease'. lol. ENJOY EVERYONE!~

The eight were outside in the park, having a picnic, celebrating Jessica's recovery.

"Benny, will you come here?" Annie yelled.

Benny ran up to Annie. "Yeah? What's up?"

"Can you help me get this on the table?" Anie asked, carrying the cooler with all the drinks. It was the last of the things that needed to be carry out.

"Of course!" Benny said, giving Annie a helping hand.

"Aww, isn't that cute?" Ada asked.

Nicky wrapped his arms around Ada. "Yeah. We're all cute."

Julian and Charmaine held hands as they walked after Benny and Annie.

Jessica were setting up everything when Louis approached her from behind and wrapped his arms around her waist.

"How's my little wifey doing?"

Jessica turned to him, smiling. "Wifey? Who's your wifey?"

Louis raised an eyebrow. "I don't see anyone else here."

Suddenly, Annie and Benny came to the table, placing the cooler down.

"We don't mean to intrude, we'll leave right away." Benny said jokingly.

"Well, what are you waiting for?" Louis asked. "The cooler is set, go. Take Annie with you."

Jessica slapped his chest playfullly. "You don't tell my friend to leave."

"Yeah." Charmaine and Ada approached, with their boyfriends right behind them.

"Don't worry, Jess, we got your back." Ada said.

It reminded everyone of the water situation when they first started to work with eachother, before they had any feelings for eachother.

Louis looked around at his guy friends. "Who got my back?"

Benny, Julian and Nikcy didn't budge. The only thing different now is that they got their girls.

"Oh I see, now that you guys have your girlfirends, you forget about his old buddy."

Julian shrugged. "Who said for my girl to be so pretty?" He kissed Charmaine on the lips.

"Sorry, Louis." Benny said, putting his arms around Annie.

"Can't help you." Nicky said, snuggling close to Ada.

Louis threw his hands in the air. "Some friends!" he said. "I'm a loner now."

"Awww.." Jessica said as she put her arms arounf his neck. "I'll give you a chance to make it up to me."

Louis looked at Jessica. "Well, since no one wants to get my back, I guess I'll have to make up with you."

"PIGGYBACK RIDE!"

A horror face took over Louis. "No..no..."

Louis stepped back as Jessica held her hands out.

"Yeah huh."

Everyone else laughed.

"It's okay honey. How about I get you a drink?"

"A drink to make it up to me?" Jessica asked. "I don't think so."

"How about you be the queen today. I'll get you anything you want."

"Nah ah." Jessica.

"Come on."

"Louis, remember right before I got shot?" Jessica started. "And you said something about owing Benny...you guys...getting with us?"

Ada, Annie and Charmaine looked at eachother, while Louis' face now took on a more horror face.

"What was that all about?"

Benny, Nicky and Julia looked at eachother in horror, then at Louis.

"Louis..."

Now everyone was looking at poor Louis.

"Um, nothing...remember I told you?"

Jessica shook her head. "That's not the truth."

"We want the truth." Annie said, looking at Benny.

Benny smiled uneasily. "I love you?"

Annie rolled her eyes. "Owe you? Why?"

"Julian..." Charmaine started.

"Tell us or this picnic's over." Ada threatened Nicky.

The guys looked over at Louis. "He knows."

"Okay, okay." Louis said, expaining everything.

"WHAT?!" Charmaine asked, once Louis was done.

"YOU GUYS MADE A BET ON WHO WILL GET US FIRST?" Ada asked.

Nicky smiled. "I love you."

"I love you too." Juilan said to Charmaine.

"I love you three." Louis said to Jessica.

Benny nodded, agreeing with the other guys.

"Oh, so now you love Jessica?" Annie asked.

"NO! NO!" Benny said. "I love you!"

Annie turned around. "A bet. Can't believe you."

"How about I give you full authority on the things that the guys owe me?" Benny asked.

Annie turned around, liking the idea. "So how many things do each owe you?"

"Louis owes me two, Nicky owes four, and Julian owes seven, I think."

"Hmm, let me see, okay." Annie said. "But why would I want the favors? Jessica, you have Louis' two owes."

Louis eyes widen in horror.

"Charmaine, you have Julian's seven...but then again, he was the sweetest...he traded his life for you...make it only four owes."

Charmaine smiled. "He's too sweet, forget about it. Zero owes. But Annie, you can have them against Benny."

"What?" Benny asked. "You can't do that!"

"Why can't I?" Annie asked casually.

Benny smiled weakly. "I'm just kidding?"

Annie smiled. "That's better. Now Ada, you can have Nicky's four."

"Thanks Annie." Ada said, giving Nicky a look.

Jessica smiled. "Louis..."

Louis looked at her, smiling his ever so cute smile. "Yes?"

"About that piggy backy ride..."

Louis bent down. "Yea honey."

Jessica smiled at climbed on.

"Oh wait!" Ada yelled. "I have an idea. A piggy back race!"

The boys looked at eachother in horror once again.

"Benny..."

"Julian..."

"Nicky..."

The three did nothing but bent down. This was their life. But then again, the girls were so cute.

"Louis, sweetie?" Jessica said, while on his back. "You know what?"

Louis shook his head. "What?"

"When it comes to boys against girls, remember, girls never lose."

~YAY! YAY! YAY! I'm FINISHED! Done! MY LAST CHAPTER! I'm soooo proud of myself! Hope you guys enjoyed it! Overall comment PLEASE! And once again, Thanks for all SUPPORT! LUV ALL YA!~

p.s. to Skye, I hope I made it in time!