| Fan Fiction |
by .flavored
Title: 5/5 At first i didnt think the title matched it.. but then when i read the definition again it made sense and actually went great with the story.
Poster/Background: 10/10 Loved the poster and background.. Very cute.. proubably one of the cutest posters i have ever seen.
Forewords: 3/5 The foreword wasnt too great, mainly because it didnt really explain what the story was going to be about.
Plot: 15/15 WOW. Is the only thing i can come up with.. I have never read a story with a plot like this.. It was very good and interesting..
Flow: 9/10 Many people proubably said they wished it could have been longer.. But i think it went really well with the plot of the story.. and you also explained everything in such a short amount of chapters.. it actually surprised me.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15 It was PERFECT! I have never read a story with such good spelling, grammer, vocabulary It almost made me cry with joy.
Characterization: 10/10 I loved how you described the characters.. Really it made me laugh.. and i understood them in such a short amount of time.. Really A+ for you!
Originality: 10/10 Very original.. i dont think there is anything more original then this, When i was reading this i wasnt sure if i was dreaming or what.. (thats a compliment)
Writing style: 10/10 Love your writing style.. stick with it and keep writing the way you do.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10 Yep.. I loved it.. Reviewing this with a temperature of 100 degrees really made me freak out when i was reading this.. I was sick so i thought i was seeing things.. But i wasnt.. this story really woke me up.. haha Loved it keep writing the way you do. An excellent writer.
Overall score: 97/100
A/N: Lol. Right =D
GO TO FEISTY PRINCESS AND VOTE PEOPLE! =DDDD